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milapila2706

March 2, 2024

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Songs in my head

Since I was a kid I knew I wanted to be a writer. Back then, I wasn't sure if I wanted to write fiction or non-fiction. Both were very attractive to me. But now I don't see have enough time to practice. That's why, using this app has helped me a lot: I can write whatever I want and practice my English at the same time.

But my love for writing also led me to the world of song writing. The thing is that I don't really write songs, like in a paper or online, I just record myself in an app I have. It's awesome because it doesn't take me more than 10 minutes. Just a few minutes ago, I was listening to some records. I don't have a wonderful voice, but I really like what I composed.

Apart from being a writer, other childhood dream I had was to be a singer. I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Being in front of a whole crowd, displaying passion about my music all over the stage. That's why, all I want now is to someway start making music. I have a piano, but I don't really play anything. I want to, but I don't have time. However, I keep recording myself and today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just moving the order of them in any way you like. That's why I'm happy now and with many songs in my head.

That's all! Thanks for reading. I would be grateful if you give me some advices about my use of connectors, prepositions and vocabulary ✌️

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Since I was a kid I knew I wanted to be a writer.

Back then, I wasn't sure if I wanted to write fiction or non-fiction.

But now I don't see have enough time to practice.

That's why, using this app has helped me a lot: I can write whatever I want and practice my English at the same time.

But mMy love for writing also led me to the world of song writing.

The thing is that I don't really write songs, like in aon paper or online, I just record myself using an app I have.

Just a few minutes ago, I was listening to some recordings.

"Records" is used as another word for "albums". The noun you are looking for is recordings.

I don't have a wonderful voice, but I really like what I composed.

Apart from being a writer, nother childhood dream I had was to be a singer.

I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Bbeing in front of a whole crowd, displaying my passion about myfor music all over the stage.

That's why, all I want now is to someway start making music.

"Someway" isn't really a word. "Somehow" is a word, but doesn't really work here. Maybe you could say "I want a way to make music"

I have a piano, but I don't really play anything.

I want to, but I don't have time.

However, I keep recording myself and t. Today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just moving the order ofby rearranging them in any way you like.

Rearranging is the perfect word to use in this sentence!

That's why I'm happy now and, with many songs in my head.

That's all!

Thanks for reading.

I would be grateful if you give me some advices about my use of connectors, prepositions and vocabulary ✌️

Songs in my head

Since I was a kid I knew I wanted to be a writer.

Back then, I wasn't sure if I wanted to write fiction or non-fiction.

Both were very attractive to me.

That's why, using this app has helped me a lot:, I can write whatever I want and practice my English at the same time.

But my love for writing also led me to the world of song writing.

The thing is that I don't really write songs, like in a paper or online, I just record myself in an app I have.

It's awesome because it doesn't take me more than 10 minutes.

Just a few minutes ago, I was listening to some records.

I don't have a wonderful voice, but I really like what I composed.

Apart from being a writer, other childhood dream I had was to be a singer.

I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Being in front of a whole crowd, displaying passion about my music all over the stage.

That's why, all I want now is to someway start making music.

I have a piano, but I don't really play anything.

I want to, but I don't have time.

However, I keep recording myself and today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just moving the order of them in any way you like.

That's why I'm happy now and with many songs in my head.

That's all!

Thanks for reading.

I would be grateful if you give me some advices about my use of connectors, prepositions and vocabulary ✌️

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Your English is very good, native level in this paragraph !

Songs in my head

Since I was a kid I knew I wanted to be a writer.

Back then, I wasn't sure if/whether I wanted to write fiction or non-fiction.

"if" is okay in casual language.
"whether" is correct in written language.

Both were very attractiveppealing to me.

But now I've realized that I don't see have enough time to practice.

That's why, using this app/site has helped me a lot: I can write whatever I want and practice my English at the same time.

But my love for writing also led me to the world of song writing.

The thing is that I don't really write songs, like in a on paper or online, I just record myself in an app I have.

It's awesome because it doesn't takes me no more than 10 minutes.

Just a few minutes ago, I was listening to some records.

I don't have a wonderful voice, but I really like what I composed.

Apart from being a writer, another childhood dream I had was to be a singer.

another childhood dream (singular)
other childhood dreams (plural)

I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Being in front of a whole/big crowd, displaying passion aboutfor my music all overcross the stage.

That's why, all I want now is to someway start making music somehow.

I have a piano, but I don't really play anything.

I want to, but I don't have time.

However, I keep recording myself and today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just moving their order of them in any way you like.

That's why I'm happy now and withI have many songs in my head.

That's all!

Thanks for reading.

I would be grateful if you give me some advices about my use of connectors, prepositions and vocabulary ✌️

some advice (singular)

Feedback

Very good.

Since I was a kid I knew II've known that I've wanted to be a writer since I was a kid.

Putting "since I was a kid" at the end sounds more natural

Back then, I wasn't sure if I wanted to write fiction or non-fiction.

Both were very attractiveppealing to me.

appealing is more about tastes and preferences, attractive is more accurate if there's something concrete that's implicitly or explicitly stated about why it draws your attention

But now it seems that I don't see have enough time to practice.

That's why, using this app has helped me a lot: I can write whatever I want to and practice my English at the same time.

But my love for writing has also led me to the world of song writing.

The thing is that I don't really write songs, like in aon paper or online, I just record myself using an app that I have.

It's awesome because it doesn't take me more than 10 minutes.

Just a few minutes ago, I was listening to some records.

I don't have a wonderful voice, but I really like what I composed.

Apart from being a writer, another childhood dream I had was to be a singer.

I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Being in front of a whole crowd, displaying passion aboutfor my music all overcross the stage.

That's why, all I want now is to somewayhow start making music.

for me, someway is a fairly uncommon word

I have a piano, but I don't really play anything.

I want to, but I don't have time.

However, I keep recording myself and today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just by moving the order of them tracks in any way you like.

That's why I'm happy now and withI have many songs in my head.

That's all!

Thanks for reading.

I would be grateful if you give me some advices about my use of connectors, prepositions and vocabulary ✌️

Feedback

Very good overall, just some small observations

Since I was a kid I knew I wanted to be a writer.

Back then, I wasn't sure if I wanted to write fiction or non-fiction.

Both were very attractive to me.

But now I don't see have enough time to practice.

That's why, using this app has helped me a lot:. I can write whatever I want and practice my English at the same time.

But my love for writing also led me to the world of song writing.

The thing is that, I don't really write songs, like in a on paper or online, I just record myself in an app I have.

It's awesome because it doesn't take me more than 10 minutes.

Just a few minutes ago, I was listening to some records.

I don't have a wonderful voice, but I really like what I composed.

Apart from being a writer, another childhood dream I had was to be a singer.

I daydreamed a lot about it as a child:. Being in front of a whole crowd, displaying a passion aboutfor my music all over the stage.

That's why, all I want now is to somewday start making music.

I have a piano, but I don't really play anything.

I want to, but I don't have time.

However, I keep recording myself and today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just by moving the order of them in any way you like.

That's why I'm happy now and, with many songs in my head.

I would be grateful if you give me some advices about my use of connectors, prepositions, and vocabulary ✌️

Feedback

I notice you say "really" a lot. In some ways, it is fine to use the word, but not too much. For the colons ":", you should use them when you are presenting examples of something. For the sentence, "I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Being in front of a whole crowd, displaying passion about my music all over the stage." I would add a colon if you said "For example, I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Being in front of a whole crowd, displaying passion about my music all over the stage." Another way you can combine these sentences is by using "such as." An example: "I daydreamed a lot about it as a child, such as being in front of a whole crowd, displaying passion about my music all over the stage." However, your story was very interesting and you did a good job writing in English. Keep it up! :)

Songs in my head


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Since I was a kid I knew I wanted to be a writer.


Since I was a kid I knew I wanted to be a writer.

Since I was a kid I knew II've known that I've wanted to be a writer since I was a kid.

Putting "since I was a kid" at the end sounds more natural

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Back then, I wasn't sure if I wanted to write fiction or non-fiction.


Back then, I wasn't sure if I wanted to write fiction or non-fiction.

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Back then, I wasn't sure if/whether I wanted to write fiction or non-fiction.

"if" is okay in casual language. "whether" is correct in written language.

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Back then, I wasn't sure if I wanted to write fiction or non-fiction.

Both were very attractive to me.


Both were very attractive to me.

Both were very attractiveppealing to me.

appealing is more about tastes and preferences, attractive is more accurate if there's something concrete that's implicitly or explicitly stated about why it draws your attention

Both were very attractiveppealing to me.

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But now I don't see have enough time to practice.


But now I don't see have enough time to practice.

But now it seems that I don't see have enough time to practice.

But now I've realized that I don't see have enough time to practice.

But now I don't see have enough time to practice.

That's why, using this app has helped me a lot: I can write whatever I want and practice my English at the same time.


That's why, using this app has helped me a lot:. I can write whatever I want and practice my English at the same time.

That's why, using this app has helped me a lot: I can write whatever I want to and practice my English at the same time.

That's why, using this app/site has helped me a lot: I can write whatever I want and practice my English at the same time.

That's why, using this app has helped me a lot:, I can write whatever I want and practice my English at the same time.

That's why, using this app has helped me a lot: I can write whatever I want and practice my English at the same time.

But my love for writing also led me to the world of song writing.


But my love for writing also led me to the world of song writing.

But my love for writing has also led me to the world of song writing.

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But mMy love for writing also led me to the world of song writing.

The thing is that I don't really write songs, like in a paper or online, I just record myself in an app I have.


The thing is that, I don't really write songs, like in a on paper or online, I just record myself in an app I have.

The thing is that I don't really write songs, like in aon paper or online, I just record myself using an app that I have.

The thing is that I don't really write songs, like in a on paper or online, I just record myself in an app I have.

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The thing is that I don't really write songs, like in aon paper or online, I just record myself using an app I have.

It's awesome because it doesn't take me more than 10 minutes.


It's awesome because it doesn't take me more than 10 minutes.

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It's awesome because it doesn't takes me no more than 10 minutes.

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Just a few minutes ago, I was listening to some records.


Just a few minutes ago, I was listening to some records.

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Just a few minutes ago, I was listening to some recordings.

"Records" is used as another word for "albums". The noun you are looking for is recordings.

I don't have a wonderful voice, but I really like what I composed.


I don't have a wonderful voice, but I really like what I composed.

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Apart from being a writer, other childhood dream I had was to be a singer.


Apart from being a writer, another childhood dream I had was to be a singer.

Apart from being a writer, another childhood dream I had was to be a singer.

Apart from being a writer, another childhood dream I had was to be a singer.

another childhood dream (singular) other childhood dreams (plural)

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Apart from being a writer, nother childhood dream I had was to be a singer.

I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Being in front of a whole crowd, displaying passion about my music all over the stage.


I daydreamed a lot about it as a child:. Being in front of a whole crowd, displaying a passion aboutfor my music all over the stage.

I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Being in front of a whole crowd, displaying passion aboutfor my music all overcross the stage.

I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Being in front of a whole/big crowd, displaying passion aboutfor my music all overcross the stage.

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I daydreamed a lot about it as a child: Bbeing in front of a whole crowd, displaying my passion about myfor music all over the stage.

That's why, all I want now is to someway start making music.


That's why, all I want now is to somewday start making music.

That's why, all I want now is to somewayhow start making music.

for me, someway is a fairly uncommon word

That's why, all I want now is to someway start making music somehow.

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That's why, all I want now is to someway start making music.

"Someway" isn't really a word. "Somehow" is a word, but doesn't really work here. Maybe you could say "I want a way to make music"

I have a piano, but I don't really play anything.


I have a piano, but I don't really play anything.

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I want to, but I don't have time.


I want to, but I don't have time.

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However, I keep recording myself and today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just moving the order of them in any way you like.


However, I keep recording myself and today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just by moving the order of them in any way you like.

However, I keep recording myself and today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just by moving the order of them tracks in any way you like.

However, I keep recording myself and today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just moving their order of them in any way you like.

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However, I keep recording myself and t. Today I hope to use and app I found where you can record many sounds and compose something just moving the order ofby rearranging them in any way you like.

Rearranging is the perfect word to use in this sentence!

That's why I'm happy now and with many songs in my head.


That's why I'm happy now and, with many songs in my head.

That's why I'm happy now and withI have many songs in my head.

That's why I'm happy now and withI have many songs in my head.

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That's why I'm happy now and, with many songs in my head.

That's all!


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Thanks for reading.


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I would be grateful if you give me some advices about my use of connectors, prepositions and vocabulary ✌️


I would be grateful if you give me some advices about my use of connectors, prepositions, and vocabulary ✌️

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I would be grateful if you give me some advices about my use of connectors, prepositions and vocabulary ✌️

some advice (singular)

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I would be grateful if you give me some advices about my use of connectors, prepositions and vocabulary ✌️

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