Jan. 20, 2024
Sometimes, I want to be pampered (22)
I'm a hairstylist, but when I get my hair done, I visit my friend's hair salon.
I get straightening per 6 month.
Basically, your hair grow 1 cm per month, so after 6 month your hair will grow 6 cm.
The texture of my hair gets rough, and it doesn't look nice after 6 month, and it makes me want to get straightening.
Also, I dye my hair every other month.
I love visiting a hair salon.
It's so relaxing.
It's only natural that sometimes, everyone want to be pampered.
私は美容師ですが、自分の髪をやるときは、友達のヘアサロンに行きます。
私は6ヶ月ごとにストレートパーマをかけます。
基本的に、髪は一か月に1㎝伸びます、だから6ヶ月経つと、6㎝伸びます。
6ヶ月経つと私の髪はちょっと汚くなって質感も悪くなります、だからストレートパーマをかけたくなります。
その他に、2か月に1回髪を染めます。
美容室に行くのが大好きです。
とってもリラックスできます。
誰もが時々ゆっくり癒されたいのは、当たり前だよね。
Sometimes, I want to be pampered (22)
I'm a hairstylist, but when I get my hair done, I visit my friend's hair salon.
I get my hair straightening ped every 6 months.
Basically, your hair grows 1 cm per month, so after 6 months your hair will have grown 6 cm.
The texture of my hair gets rough, and it doesn't look nice after 6 months, and itwhich makes me want to get my hair straighteninged.
Also, I dye my hair every other month.
I love visiting athe hair salon.
It's so relaxing.
It's only natural that sometimes, everyone wants to be pampered.
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Very true! Everyone wants to relax once in a while :)
Jan. 23, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction!
I'm a hairstylist, but when I get my hair done, I visit my friend's hair salon.
Great sentence, with the relative clause!
I get my hair straightening ped every 6 months.
Note "every six months".
Basically, your hair grows 1 cm per month, so after 6 months your hair will grow 6 cm.
Just updating a couple of plurals; well done.
The texture of my hair gets rough, and it doesn't look nice after 6 months, and it makes me want to geto for a hair straightening.
I love visiting a hair salons.
Note the plural, talking about hair salons in general.
It's only natural that sometimes, everyone wants to be pampered.
"Everyone" is odd because it's treated as a singular noun - "everyone wants" - although it refers to many people.
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Very well done indeed!
You are writing about something that really interests you, and that's excellent.
Good use with sentences using more than one verb, e.g., "it makes me want to..."
I am positive you will be able to write additional interesting entries about your work as a hairstylist.
Jan. 20, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction! I think I'll write something about hair again soon.
I get straightening pevery 6 months.
Basically, your hair grows 1 cm per month, so after 6 months your hair will grow 6 cm.
The texture of my hair gets rough, and it doesn't look nice after 6 months, and itwhich makes me want to get straightening.
I love visiting a hair salons.
Or "the hair salon."
It's only natural that sometimes, everyonpeople want to be pampered.
Jan. 20, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction!
Sometimes, I want to be pampered
I'm a hairstylist, but when I get my hair done, I visit my friend's hair salon.
I get straightening pevery 6 months.
Basically, your hair grows 1 cm per month, so after 6 months your hair will grow 6 cm.
The texture of my hair gets rough, and it doesn't look nice after 6 months, andso it makes me want to get straightening.
We tend not to use more than one "and" to connect clauses in a sentence.
Also, I dye my hair every other month.
I love visiting a hair salons.
It's so relaxing.
It's only natural that sometimes, everyonpeople want to be pampered.
Side note, everyone/everybody/anyone are all treated as singular in English
Jan. 20, 2024
Thank you so much as always!
Sometimes, I want to be pampered
I'm a hairstylist, but when I get my hair done, I visit my friend's hair salon.
I get my hair straightening ped every 6 months.
Basically, your hair grow 1 cm per month, so after 6 months your hair will grow (by) 6 cm.
With or without "by" is perfectly fine.
The texture of my hair gets rough, and it doesn't look nice after 6 month, and is. It makes me want to get it straighteninged.
Typically more than 3 sentences connected by "and" is too long, so I separated the last sentence.
Also, I dye my hair every other month.
I love visiting a hair salons.
It's so relaxing.
It's only natural that sometimes, everyone wants to be pampered.
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Agreed. Haircuts are so relaxing. Somehow, they're even nicer than massages haha.
Jan. 20, 2024
I know right? Maybe it's because you feel refreshed and you look cooler than before.
Thank you for your correction!
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