July 1, 2025
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Sometimes man get lost in the loudy world where a man cannot hear his own words. he realize how much alone when he walk in the crowd. smiles are fake, words are superficial for this man. In that times man only want silence, silence which tell nothing but explain eveything. Because some emotions are cannot contain to the word, some pains are only echoes in the heart.
Sometimes maen get lost in the loudy world where a manone cannot hear his own wordtheir own thoughts.
Better yet " we could get lost in a loud world where it's difficult to keep track of one's thoughts"
heYou realize how much alone you are when heyou walk in thea crowd.
smiles are fake, words are superficial forin this man.world
I know this is written in a reflective mood so I may be missing your meaning
In thatDuring these times man, you only want silence, silence which tellsays nothing but explains everything.
Because sSome emotions are cannot contain to the worbe explained, some pains are only echoes in the heart.
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Sometimes manone gets lost in the loudy world where a man cannot hear his own words.
The pronoun "one" is weird for a lot of non-Anglophones. It refers to an unspecified individual.
hHe realizes how much alone he is when he walk ins through the crowd.
"Through" makes more sense in this context. Walking is a verb of movement. Walking "in" the crowd would technically mean that he's walking inside of the crowd. Technically correct, but "through" works better. That, or "into"
sSmiles are fake, words are superficial for this man.
The first word of a sentence is always capitalized. Also, this is a very poetic sentence. I like it.
In thate times the man only wants silence, silence which tells nothing, but explains everything.
Because some emotions are cannot be contain to theed in a word, some pains are only echoes in the heart.
"Be contained" is the correct usage of the passive voice, which I think you were going for here.
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This is a very poetic piece. I wish thee the best in thy English journey. Thou clearly hast a very deep soul.
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Sometimes a man gets lost in the loudy world where a manhe cannot hear his own wordthoughts.
he realizes how much alone he is when he walks into the crowd.
smiles are fake, words are superficial for this man.
In thatese times a man only wants silence,. silence which tells nothing but, explains everything.
that, gives the context it happened in the past
Because some emotions are cannot be contain to theed in words, some pains are only echoes in the heart.
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7/10 some grammar is incorrect but very readable
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Sometimes man get lost in the loudy world where a man cannot hear his own words. Sometimes a man gets lost in the loud Sometimes The pronoun "one" is weird for a lot of non-Anglophones. It refers to an unspecified individual. Sometimes m Better yet " we could get lost in a loud world where it's difficult to keep track of one's thoughts" |
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he realize how much alone when he walk in the crowd. he realizes how
"Through" makes more sense in this context. Walking is a verb of movement. Walking "in" the crowd would technically mean that he's walking inside of the crowd. Technically correct, but "through" works better. That, or "into"
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smiles are fake, words are superficial for this man. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
The first word of a sentence is always capitalized. Also, this is a very poetic sentence. I like it. smiles are fake, words are superficial I know this is written in a reflective mood so I may be missing your meaning |
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In that times man only want silence, silence which tell nothing but explain eveything. In th that, gives the context it happened in the past In th
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Because some emotions are cannot contain to the word, some pains are only echoes in the heart. Because some emotions Because some emotions "Be contained" is the correct usage of the passive voice, which I think you were going for here.
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