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BlackGlasses

July 17, 2024

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Sometimes

Sometimes I do nothing but hear my thoughts and the birds' singing. Sometimes, I focus on my thoughts to the point I can't hear the birds. Sometimes, there's only the wind, but never silence.

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Sometimes, I do nothing but hear my own thoughts and the birds' singing.

Sometimes, I focus so much on my thoughts to the point that I can't hear the birds.

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BlackGlasses

Aug. 1, 2024

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Thank you!

Sometimes

Sometimes I do nothing but hear my thoughts and the birds' singing.

Sometimes, I focus on my thoughts to the point where I can't hear the birds.

Sometimes, there's only the wind, but never silence.

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BlackGlasses

Aug. 1, 2024

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Thank you!

Sometimes

Sometimes I do nothing but hear my thoughts and the birds' singing.

Sometimes, I focus on my thoughts to the point that I can't hear the birds.

Sometimes, there's only the wind, but never silence.

Taken with the other sentences, this is very poetic. A more literal statement would be, "Sometimes, I hear only the wind, but never silence."

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BlackGlasses

Aug. 1, 2024

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Thank you!

Sometimes


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Sometimes I do nothing but hear my thoughts and the birds singing.


Sometimes I do nothing but hear my thoughts and birds singing.


Sometimes, I focus on my thoughts to the point I can't hear the birds.


Sometimes, I focus on my thoughts to the point where I can't hear the birds.

Sometimes, I focus on my thoughts to the point that I can't hear the birds.

Sometimes, I focus so much on my thoughts to the point that I can't hear the birds.

Sometimes, there's only the wind, but never silence.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sometimes, there's only the wind, but never silence.

Taken with the other sentences, this is very poetic. A more literal statement would be, "Sometimes, I hear only the wind, but never silence."

Sometimes I do nothing but hear my thoughts and the birds' singing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sometimes, I do nothing but hear my own thoughts and the birds' singing.

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