July 28, 2023
I am passionate about business since I was young and I like a lot to seek opportunities that are not met. It's like a found treasure for me but because of my self-doubt that blocks me from success with it for a long time. Now I am done with the struggle and trying to do that thing no matter what it takes. and I think the last material may be some luck!
Something that I want to do is builtd my own business.
Built is the past tense, so build instead - you could also use "start" or "create", but build works as well :)
I amhave been passionate about business since I was young and I like a lot to seek opportunities that are not met.
It's like a found treasure for me, but because of my self-doubt thats blocksed me from being success withful in it for a long time.
Something that I want to do is builtd my own business.
Built is past tense
I amhave been passionate about business since I was young, and I like a lot to seek opportunities that are not yet met.
It's like a found treasure for me, but because of my self-doubt thats blocksed me from success with it for a long time.
“Found treasure” is not quite right here. Maybe you are looking for something more like, “It has always been my dream, …”
Now I am done with the struggle, and tryI am willing to do that thing no matter what it takes.
Or “Now I am done with the self-doubt,…”
and I think the last materialthing I need may be some luck!
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Very good! I hope you are able to start your business one day!
Something that I want to do is built my own business.
I amhave been passionate about businesses since I was young, and I like a lotreally like to seek opportunities that are not met.
Since it was a goal in the past as well as the present, "have been" works best here. Also "I like to seek new opportunities" is probably the best sounding phrase. I would use that, but I'm trying not to change your wording too much.
When I talk about liking something, I say "I really like [that thing]" or "I like [that thing] a lot." So I changed your wording.
It's like a found treasure for me, but because of my self-doubt thats blocksed me from success with it for a long time.
Now I am done with the struggle and trying to do that thing no matter what it takes.
and I think the last materialthing I need may be some luck!
Material sounds weird here. I think of a 'material' as being a physical thing, such as wood. You can also say:
-... the last missing piece ...
-... the final key...
-... another element I need ...
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I hope your business goes well if you manage to start one up! Its a cool dream to have!
Something that I want to do is built my own business. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Something that I want to do is buil Built is past tense Something that I want to do is buil Built is the past tense, so build instead - you could also use "start" or "create", but build works as well :) |
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Now I am done with the struggle and trying to do that thing no matter what it takes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Now I am done with the struggle, and Or “Now I am done with the self-doubt,…” |
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