July 10, 2021
Something new
Lately I've been thinking about learning another language. When I was younger, I studied English because my parents made me. I was aware that being fluent in English would be important and useful for me in the future, so I never complained. However, I didn't enjoy learning it as it was an obligation and I wasn't interested in it then. I'm glad that my parents made me learn it as it's a nice skill to have. I can listen to music, read and watch series in English. Now, I would like to learn a language not as an obligation but as a genuine interest. I've come to the realization that the more I know, the more opportunities I will have in the future. My mom used to say to me that you can lose everything you own, but you can't lose your knowledge and skills. No one can take that from you.
Something new
Lately, I've been thinking about learning another language.
When I was younger, I studied English because my parents made me.
I was aware thatknew being fluent in English would be important and useful for me in the future, so I never complained.
Nothing wrong with your sentence but saying "knew" sounds more natural.
However, I didn't enjoy learning it as i. It was an obligation and I wasn't interested in it then.
I'm glad that my parents made me learn it asince it's a nice skill to have.
I can listen to music, read, and watch series in English.
Oxford comma.
Now, I would like to learn a language not as an obligation but as aout of genuine interest.
I've come to the realization that the more I know, the more opportunities I will have in the future.
My mom used to say to me that you can lose everything you own, but you can't lose your knowledge and skills.
No one can take that from you.
Feedback
Very good! I mostly made minor tweaks.
July 10, 2021
Thanks!
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Lately I've been thinking about learning another language. Lately, I've been thinking about learning another language. |
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When I was younger, I studied English because my parents made me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was aware that being fluent in English would be important and useful for me in the future, so I never complained. I Nothing wrong with your sentence but saying "knew" sounds more natural. |
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However, I didn't enjoy learning it as it was an obligation and I wasn't interested in it then. However, I didn't enjoy learning it |
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I'm glad that my parents made me learn it as it's a nice skill to have. I'm glad |
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I can listen to music, read and watch series in English. I can listen to music, read, and watch series in English. Oxford comma. |
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Now, I would like to learn a language not as an obligation but as a genuine interest. Now, I would like to learn a language not as an obligation but |
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I've come to the realization that the more I know, the more opportunities I will have in the future. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My mom used to say to me that you can lose everything you own, but you can't lose your knowledge and skills. My mom used to say |
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No one can take that from you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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