Oct. 16, 2024
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I'm a little tired now so I want to talk about something easy.
I went to hike around the West Lake last Saturday, which was a famous beautiful lake in China.
Many hills and tea plantations surrounded the lake, but the one that caught my attention was a small village known for its osmanthus trees.
You can see the scenery along the trail from this video:https://youtu.be/_X_c1pWahxc
If you are in eastern China right now, I highly recommend this hiking trail to you. The fragrance under osmanthus trees in tea plantations is stunning.
有点累，想说点轻松的。
上周六我去西湖边徒步了，西湖是中国著名的美丽湖泊。
湖的周围有许多小山和茶园，但引我注目的是一个以桂花树闻名的小村庄。
你可以从这个视频中看到沿途的风景：https://youtu.be/_X_c1pWahxc
如果你现在在中国东部，我强烈推荐这条徒步路线给你。茶园桂花树下的芬芳令人叹为观止。
I went to hike around the West Lake last Saturday, which wais a famous beautiful lake in China.
The lake is still there! So even if you went to see it in the past, when you describe it, you should say that it "is", not it "was".
ManyThe lake is surrounded by lots of hills and tea plantations surrounded the lake, but the one that caught my attention the most was a small village known for its osmanthus trees.
You can use "many" instead of "lots of", but it sounds a bit rigid.
You can see the scenery along the trail from this video:https://youtu.be/_X_c1pWahxc
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If you are in eastern China right now, I highly recommend you try out this hiking trail to you.
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It sounds like you really like osmanthus :)
Nov. 4, 2024
Thanks a lot!
Yes, I really really like osmanthus. One of my dreams is to buy a house with a big yard, and then plant an osmanthus tree in it. hahaha
I'm a little tired now, so I(I) want to talkwrite about something easy.
Point #1: The 2nd "I" can be deleted. （如果你删除第二个“I”，这个句子会更简洁）
Point #2: If you are *speaking* then "talk about" is fine; if you are *writing* then "write about" is better.
I went to hiked around the West Lake (西湖) last Saturday, which wais a famous beautiful lake in Zhejiang Province in China.
NOTE: Some people might know *where* West Lake is, so I have indicated the province.
Many hills and tea plantations surrounded theis lake, but the one that caught my attention was a small village known for its osmanthus trees.
ALSO POSSIBLE: The fragrance underof the osmanthus trees in many tea plantations is stunning.
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谢谢分享视频，Tammy。看到这么多绿色植物真是太好了！
Oct. 17, 2024
Thank you so much for such detailed corrections and feedback!
I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed the video.
Have a nice day!
I went to hike around the West Lake last Saturday, which was a famous beautiful lake in China.
For proper nouns (things that are named), you don't usually need to include a/an/the
Many hills and tea plantations surrounded the lake, but the one that caught my attention was a small village known for its osmanthus trees.
You can also say "caught my eye"
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I'd never heard of an osmanthus tree before, haha. It looks very pretty, though!
Oct. 17, 2024
Thank you so much!
If you came to eastern or central China in early October, you definitely would smell it somewhere, because it's almost everywhere.
And if you ate many Chinese desserts, you might eat it, because it's a traditional ingredient for desserts in China.
Welcome to come to Shanghai and eat this type of desserts some day!
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I'm a little tired now so I want to talk about something easy.
I went ton a hike around the West Lake last Saturday, which wais a famous beautiful lake in China.
"I went on a hike" or "I went hiking" or "I hiked"
Many hills and tea plantations surrounded the lake, but the one that caught my attention was a small village known for its osmanthus trees.
You can see the scenery along the trail from this video:https://youtu.be/_X_c1pWahxc If you are in eastern China right now, I highly recommend this hiking trail to you.
The fragrance under osmanthus trees in tea plantations is stunningdelectable.
I think "stunning" is more appropriate for something visually striking.
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How beautiful!
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I'm a little tired now so I want to talk about something easyan easy topic.
"something easy" is somewhat correct, but saying "an easy topic" makes your meaning more clear.
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(or Last Saturday, I went to hike around the West Lake, which is a famous and beautiful lake in China.)
Many hills and tea plantations surrounded the lake, but the one that caught my attention was a small village known for its osmanthus trees.
You can see the scenery along the trail from this video:https://youtu.be/_X_c1pWahxc If you are in eastern China right now, I highly recommend this hiking trail to you.
The fragrance under the osmanthus trees in tea plantations is stunning.
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Good job! The West Lake seems like a beautiful place to hike around. There are plenty of places to hike where I live, but no tea plantations nor osmanthus trees, so I'm jealous of the fragrance!
Oct. 17, 2024
Thank you so much!
These hiking trails around West Lake are some of my favorite ones to recommend to foreign friends, especially those who love tea. They are beautiful, easy to approach and many tea plantations gathered together.
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