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omsr19911

Dec. 10, 2020

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Something about me

I've been thinking in my family's future. We have a lot of plans and we are working really hard to make them come true but like any men around the world my work takes up most of my time. I have a child who I love so much. He is 3 years old and very active. He likes to talk and play most the time, my wife is a very strong woman, she has problems with her family but that never break her down. About me... I like to play bass and I like to learn languages, I've never made an English test to know my level, I've never been at an institute, I've learned just watching movies, listening music, speaking with natives. I would like your help to improve my level.

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Some things about me

I've been thinking inabout my family's future, w. We have a lot of plans and we are working really hard to make them come true, but as for any man around the world, my workjob takes most of my lifetime.

Or you could also say "work" instead of "my job".
In English, "work" as a noun usually refers to the general activities that you do, and "job" means a specific type of employment or in some cases, a specific task.

I have a kid who I love too much, h. He is 3 years old and he is very active, he likes to talk and play most the time, m. My wife is a very strong woman, she has problems with her family but that never breaks her down.

About me...

I like to play bass and I like to learn languages,. I've never maddone an English test to know my level, I've never been at an institute,. I've learned just from watching movies, listening to music, speaking with natives.

If you use "made" here, then there is a difference in meaning.
"I've never made an English test" would mean that you have never created an English test. But if you use "done", it would then mean that you've never taken a test or that you've never completed one, which is what I think you wanted to say.

I would like your to help me to improve my level.

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You write very well! Everything is very clear and easy to understand. It's cool that you've learned English by watching movies and listening to music.
I would just suggest you to try to split up your sentences into smaller ones, it would make your texts flow better. Also maybe review the difference between do/make, and work/job. That's about it, very well written!

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omsr19911

Dec. 10, 2020

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Thank you. I think that I need to learn more about grammar because as I learned watching movies there are some sentences sometimes without sense because the American English sometimes is kind of "without grammar"... :)

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omsr19911

Dec. 10, 2020

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I like to play bass and I like to learn languages,. I've never maddone an English test to know my level, I've never been at an institute,. I've learned just from watching movies, listening to music, speaking with natives.

Yes you're right! I missed up .. "Done" was the right word Thank you

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ivy98

Dec. 10, 2020

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True, in American movies they don't always use the correct grammar. But it's still good to watch them, then you become more familiar with the informal ways of speaking, I guess. And anyway, your grammar is quite good already. :)

Something about me

I've been thinking inabout my family's future, w. We have a lot of plans and we are working really hard to make them come true, but as like many maen aroundin the world, my work takes up most of my lifetime.

I have a kichild who I love toso much, h. He is 3 years old and he is very active, h. He likes to talk and play most the time, m. My wife is a very strong woman, even though she has problems with her family, but thatshe never breaklet it bring her down.

Abouts for me...

I like to play bass and I like to learn languages,. I've never madetaken an English test to knowdetermine my level, and I've never been at an institute, I've learnedattended school? I learned English just by watching movies, listening to music, and speaking with natives.

I would like your help to improve my level.

Some about me


Something about me

Some things about me

I've been thinking in my family's future, we have a lot of plans and we are working really hard to make them come true but, my works takes most of my lifetime, as any men around the world.


I have a kid who I love too much, he is 3 years old and very active, he likes to talk and play most the time, my wife is a very strong woman, she has problems with her family but that never break her down.


About me...


Abouts for me...

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I like to play bass and I like to learn languages, I've never made an English test to know my level, I've never been at an institute, I've learned just watching movies, listening music, speaking with natives.


I like to play bass and I like to learn languages,. I've never madetaken an English test to knowdetermine my level, and I've never been at an institute, I've learnedattended school? I learned English just by watching movies, listening to music, and speaking with natives.

I like to play bass and I like to learn languages,. I've never maddone an English test to know my level, I've never been at an institute,. I've learned just from watching movies, listening to music, speaking with natives.

If you use "made" here, then there is a difference in meaning. "I've never made an English test" would mean that you have never created an English test. But if you use "done", it would then mean that you've never taken a test or that you've never completed one, which is what I think you wanted to say.

I would like your help to improve my level.


I would like your to help me to improve my level.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I've been thinking in my family's future, we have a lot of plans and we are working really hard to make them come true but as any man around the world my work takes most of my lifetime.


I've been thinking inabout my family's future, w. We have a lot of plans and we are working really hard to make them come true, but as like many maen aroundin the world, my work takes up most of my lifetime.

I've been thinking inabout my family's future, w. We have a lot of plans and we are working really hard to make them come true, but as for any man around the world, my workjob takes most of my lifetime.

Or you could also say "work" instead of "my job". In English, "work" as a noun usually refers to the general activities that you do, and "job" means a specific type of employment or in some cases, a specific task.

I have a kid who I love too much, he is 3 years old and he is very active, he likes to talk and play most the time, my wife is a very strong woman, she has problems with her family but that never break her down.


I have a kichild who I love toso much, h. He is 3 years old and he is very active, h. He likes to talk and play most the time, m. My wife is a very strong woman, even though she has problems with her family, but thatshe never breaklet it bring her down.

I have a kid who I love too much, h. He is 3 years old and he is very active, he likes to talk and play most the time, m. My wife is a very strong woman, she has problems with her family but that never breaks her down.

Something about me


I've been thinking in my family's future.


We have a lot of plans and we are working really hard to make them come true but like any men around the world my work takes up most of my time.


I have a child who I love so much.


He is 3 years old and very active.


He likes to talk and play most the time, my wife is a very strong woman, she has problems with her family but that never break her down.


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