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Some words that I learnt today

Today , I was learning some new words that I would like to introduce to my vocabulary :

My achievement for today is learning more about new cultures such as African culture .
My best acknowledgement is can to listen the problrem from other people.
I am considered a activist person.
I must to make a adaption of these new conditions .
I must to admission my mental problem.

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Some words that I learnted today

The sentence is incomplete. It needs to be a full sentence, so "that" is unnecessary, and we use "learned"

Today , I was learninged some new words that I would like to introduceadd to my vocabulary : ¶
.
My achievement for today is learning more about
new cultures, such as African culture .

Remove the space before the comma. "Learned" is better than "was learning." "Add" is more natural than "introduce."
"New" is unnecessary. Remove extra space before the full stop.

My best acknowledgement is canskill is being able to listen to the problrem froms of other people.s

"Best acknowledgement" is wrong. "Can to listen" is incorrect. Fix the typo from "problrem" to "problem."

I am considered an activist person.

Use "an" before "activist." "Person" is unnecessary.

I must to make a adaption ofadapt to these new conditions .

"Must to" is incorrect. Use "adapt to" instead of "make an adaption."

I must to admissiont my mental problemhealth issues.

"Must to" is wrong. Use "admit" (not "admission"). "Mental problem" is better as "mental health issues."

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Great job! Just focus on sentence structure and verb forms. Keep it up!

Some words that I learnt today


Some words that I learnted today

The sentence is incomplete. It needs to be a full sentence, so "that" is unnecessary, and we use "learned"

Today , I was learning some new words that I would like to introduce to my vocabulary : My achievement for today is learning more about new cultures such as African culture .


Today , I was learninged some new words that I would like to introduceadd to my vocabulary : ¶
.
My achievement for today is learning more about
new cultures, such as African culture .

Remove the space before the comma. "Learned" is better than "was learning." "Add" is more natural than "introduce." "New" is unnecessary. Remove extra space before the full stop.

My best acknowledgement is can to listen the problrem from other people.


My best acknowledgement is canskill is being able to listen to the problrem froms of other people.s

"Best acknowledgement" is wrong. "Can to listen" is incorrect. Fix the typo from "problrem" to "problem."

I am considered a activist person.


I am considered an activist person.

Use "an" before "activist." "Person" is unnecessary.

I must to make a adaption of these new conditions .


I must to make a adaption ofadapt to these new conditions .

"Must to" is incorrect. Use "adapt to" instead of "make an adaption."

I must to admission my mental problem.


I must to admissiont my mental problemhealth issues.

"Must to" is wrong. Use "admit" (not "admission"). "Mental problem" is better as "mental health issues."

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