Sept. 16, 2020
Some thoughts
The activities of building a cultural city are finished and I have some thoughts.
The division of labor of our five-person team is clear-out and each one is charged with specific responsibilities. We act strictly following the instructions of high authority and never dared to slack off. I think we have tried our best.
The staff of the grass-level community are really hard at work, they get up early and go to bed late, though they don’t have high salaries. Their attitude towards work is worth learning.
The community’s work conditions are really good than we used to thought and it was better than ours. This shows that Fuyang is developing too fast.
The comprehensive quality of all the staff of the community is high and they are very young, very energetic and very educated. The facts overturned our conventional imaginations.
Building a cultural city is a giant project and it needs our joint efforts. We should start with ourselves, at least, we don’t litter.
We act strictly following the instructions of a higher authority and never dared to slack off.
The staff of the grass-level community are really hard at workers, they get up early and go to bed late, even though they don’t have high salaries.
Their attitude towards work is worth learning from.
The community’s work conditions are really goodbetter than we used to thought and it was better than ours.
This shows that Fuyang is developing too fast.
The comprehensive quality of all the staff of the community's staff is high and they are very young, very energetic and very educated.
We should start with ourselves, by at least, we don’ not littering.
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Ok, I have no idea whatsoever of what you're talking about so my corrections could be way off.
Sept. 16, 2020
Thank you for your correction.
Some thoughts
The activities related tof building a cultural city are finished and I have some thoughts.
The division of labor ofamong our five-person team is clear-ocut and each one is charged with specific responsibilities.
Rather than "each one is charged with specific responsibilities." it would be more natural to say "each one is responsible for specific tasks"
We act strictly followinged the instructions of higher authority's instructions and never dared to slack off.
Their attitude towards work is worth learning from.
The community’s work conditions are really goodmuch better than we used to thought and it waswere better than ours.
The comprehensive quality of all the staff of the community's staff is high and they are very young, very energetic, and very educated.
Using "very" three times sounds repetitive.
The facts* overturned our conventional imaginexpectations.
*"facts" is okay, but "reality" sounds better.
Building a cultural city is a giant project and it needs* our joint efforts.
*"needs" is okay, but "requires" sounds better.
We should start with ourselves, at. At the very least, we don’shouldn't litter.
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Overall good job! Just made some corrections for the smoothness and flow of the text.
Sept. 17, 2020
谢谢你的修改，谢谢你。
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The activities of building a cultural city are finished and I have some thoughts. The activities related to |
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The division of labor of our five-person team is clear-out and each one is charged with specific responsibilities. The division of labor Rather than "each one is charged with specific responsibilities." it would be more natural to say "each one is responsible for specific tasks" |
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We act strictly following the instructions of high authority and never dared to slack off. We We act strictly following the instructions of a higher authority and never dare |
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I think we have tried our best. |
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The staff of the grass-level community are really hard at work, they get up early and go to bed late, though they don’t have high salaries. The staff of the grass-level community are really hard |
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Their attitude towards work is worth learning. Their attitude towards work is worth learning from. Their attitude towards work is worth learning from. |
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The community’s work conditions are really good than we used to thought and it was better than ours. The community’s work conditions are The community’s work conditions are |
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This shows that Fuyang is developing too fast. This shows that Fuyang is developing |
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The comprehensive quality of all the staff of the community is high and they are very young, very energetic and very educated. The comprehensive quality of Using "very" three times sounds repetitive. The comprehensive quality of all |
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The facts overturned our conventional imaginations. The facts* overturned our conventional *"facts" is okay, but "reality" sounds better. |
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Building a cultural city is a giant project and it needs our joint efforts. Building a cultural city is a giant project and it needs* our joint efforts. *"needs" is okay, but "requires" sounds better. |
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We should start with ourselves, at least, we don’t litter. We should start with ourselves We should start with ourselves |
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