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Tammy

April 1, 2025

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Some Terrace Field Views

During the online chat on Sunday morning, I shared the experience that I had gone to a terrace field.

Today, I finally have some time to upload two videos about it. You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/@myplain/shorts

The yellow flowers in the terraces are rapeseed flowers.

I really love this place. Hope you like it too.


在周日早上的在线聊天中,我分享了去梯田玩耍的经历。

今天,我终于有时间上传了两个关于它的视频。你可以在这里看到它们:https://www.youtube.com/@myplain/shorts

梯田里的黄色花儿们是油菜花。

我真的很喜欢这个地方。希望你也喜欢。

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Some Terraced Field Views

During the online chat on Sunday morning, I shared {the experience that I had gone | my experience of going} to a terraced field.

"My experience of going" is more natural.

Today, I finally haved some time to upload two videos about it.

I would use "had" since you already uploaded them before you posted this.

You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/@myplain/shorts The yellow flowers in the terraces are rapeseed flowers.

I really love this place.

Hope you like it too.

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Nice! :-)

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Tammy

yesterday

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Thank you!

Have a nice day!

During thean online chat on Sunday morning, I shared the experience that I had goneof going to a terrace field.

ALSO POSSIBLE: During an online Sunday morning chat, I shared my experience of visiting a rice paddy.
注意:大多数“terrace fields”实际上是用来种水稻的,对吗?如果是这样,你可以把它们描述为“rice paddies(稻田).”

Today, I finally have some time to upload two videos about it.

You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/@myplain/shorts The yellow flowers in the terraces are rapeseed flowers.

I really love this place.

Hope you like it too.

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Thanks for sharing. I thought they were mustard flowers, but you pointed out they are rapeseed flowers

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Tammy

yesterday

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Thank you!

Terrace fields are not used to grow rice all the time. You can see multiple plants on terrace fields, such as tea, wheat, rice, rapeseed, and so on.

Some Terrace Field Views

Today, I finally have some time to upload two videos about it.

You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/@myplain/shorts The yellow flowers in the terraces are rapeseed flowers.

I really love this place.

Hope you'll like it too.

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哦,是吗?🥲

They are beautiful, I didn't notice you mentioned the name of the flowers 😅, my bad.

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Tammy

yesterday

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Hahaha... Have a nice day!

Some Terrace Field Views

During the online chat on Sunday morning, I shared the experience that I had gone to a terrace field.

Today, I finally haved some time to upload two videos about it.

You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/@myplain/shorts The yellow flowers in the terraces are rapeseed flowers.

I really love this place.

HI hope you like it too.

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Tammy

April 1, 2025

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Thank you!

Have a nice day!

During the online chat on Sunday morning, I shared themy experience that I had goneof going to a terrace field.

"Shared my experience of going..." is a more common and fluent way to express personal experiences.

The phrase "the experience that I had gone to" is grammatically correct, but it's a bit awkward and overly formal.

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Overall, great effort! You've done a great job :D

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Tammy

April 1, 2025

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Thank you!

Have a nice day!

Some Terraced Field Views

During the online chat on Sunday morning, I shared the experience that I had gone to a terraced field.

In this context, "terraced" is an adjective as it describes the type of field you visited.

Today, I finally have some time to upload two videos about it.

You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/@myplain/shorts The yellow flowers in the terraces are rapeseed flowers.

I really love this place.

Hope you like it too.

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Excellent! I went to see your videos and they are very pretty. You live in a beautiful area!

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Tammy

April 1, 2025

1

Thank you!

That terraced field is a three-hour drive from Shanghai. There's no mountain in Shanghai......

I really love this place.


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During the online chat on Sunday morning, I shared the experience that I had gone to a terraced field.

In this context, "terraced" is an adjective as it describes the type of field you visited.

During the online chat on Sunday morning, I shared themy experience that I had goneof going to a terrace field.

"Shared my experience of going..." is a more common and fluent way to express personal experiences. The phrase "the experience that I had gone to" is grammatically correct, but it's a bit awkward and overly formal.

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During thean online chat on Sunday morning, I shared the experience that I had goneof going to a terrace field.

ALSO POSSIBLE: During an online Sunday morning chat, I shared my experience of visiting a rice paddy. 注意:大多数“terrace fields”实际上是用来种水稻的,对吗?如果是这样,你可以把它们描述为“rice paddies(稻田).”

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"My experience of going" is more natural.

Today, I finally have some time to upload two videos about it.


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Today, I finally haved some time to upload two videos about it.

I would use "had" since you already uploaded them before you posted this.

You can see them here: https://www.youtube.com/@myplain/shorts The yellow flowers in the terraces are rapeseed flowers.


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