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galoarellano1987

Oct. 17, 2024

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Some strategies for improve my skills

As I am looking for a new job, I need to improve my speaking and listening in English. English is not my native language, so I decided to apply some strategies for improve me.

My first step is writing every day in this plattform.
My second step is save my voice with my phone, for example every night i must save everything I did in the day.
My third step is chating with my friends Rene and Julian.
The fourd step is listening every day or watch series with subtitles, however watching series with subtitles seems to me a few strange, because my tendence is reading rather than listening.
The last step is practice speaking with another people, but currently in my country the electrical service is out when I get home. By this situation, I will practice speaking only the weekend.

Thank you for reading this article.
God bless you.

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Some strategies forto improve my skills

As I am looking for a new job, and I need to improve my ability to speaking and listening inunderstand English.

English is not my native language, so I decided to applydopt some strategies forto improve me.it.

My first step is writing every day ion this plattform.

My second step is saverecord my voice withon my phone, f. For example every night iI must saverecord everything I did in thethat day.

My third step is chating with my friends Rene and Julian.

The fourdth step is listening every day or watching a series with subtitles, h. However, watching a series with subtitles seems to me a fewa bit strange, because my tendencey is to reading the subtitles rather than listening.

The last step is practice speaking with another peoplerson, but currently in my country, the electrical serviceity is out when I get home.

Byecause of this situation, I will practicse speaking only over the weekend.

Thank you for reading this article.

God bless you.

Some strategies forto improve my skills

AsSince I am looking for a new job,; I need to improve my speaking and listening in English.

English is not my native language, so I decided to apply some strategies for improve ment.

My second step is save my voice with my phone, for example every night i must sato record myself with my phone and go over everything that I did in thethat day.

The fourdth step is listening every dayto, or watch series with subtitles everyday, however, watching series with subtitles seems to me a fewbit strange, because my tendence is. I tend to reading rather than listening(*) .

(*) it would be best to add something at the end here. for example, " i tend to read rather than listen to youtube". if you leave it like that it feels awkward

The last step is practice speaking with another people, bu. I am not currently in my country the electrical service is out when I get homeable to use the internet because of a power outage in my area.

Byecause of this situation,; I will practice speaking only the weekend.

As I am looking for a new job, I need to improve my speaking and listening in English.

English is not my native language, so I've decided to apply some strategies forto help myself improve me.

for improve me --> normally unless you're using the imperative (Example: Help me!), you don't put the subject after the verb like this. You also don't use for/para the same in English as in Spanish, the preposition 'to' before a verb is normally better.

My first step is writing every day ion this plattform.

you could say "writing daily" too :)

My second step is saveto record my voice withon my phone, f. For example, every night iI must savetalk about everything I did in thethat day.

I feel as though this sentence would sound better split in two or reformulate.

My third step is chatting with my friends Rene and Julian.

The fourdth step is listening every day to (SOMETHING) or watching series with subtitles, h. However, watching series with subtitles seems to me a fewa bit strange, because myI tendence is to reading rather than listening.

You need to specify what you're listening to. When using verbs with -ing ending in a list, they all have the same ending/conjugation. (Ex: I like reading, walking my dog, listening to music.)
No need to add 'me', but you could say 'I personally find watching series with subtitles a bit strange' if you want to give an opinion
few is used for things that you can count (A few days, A few books). Use 'a bit' or 'a little' instead
I think you meant in the last part that you tend to read the subtitles and not focus on what is being said, however I'm not sure.
Also tendence is not a word used in modern English. You can use the verb and say (I tend to.....) or say (I have a tendency to...)

The last step is to practice speaking with another people, but currently in my country the electrical service isity is currently out when I get home.

I would say "by the time I get home" would be more natural.
Also really sorry to hear that, power outages suck. :/

By this situationecause of this, I will practice speaking only theon weekends.

you can't ever say 'by this situation' --> if you want to use this word, replace it with "Due to this situation"
However because of this is more informal, natural, and easier to use

Thank you for reading this articlepost.

article is really only used for newspapers (ex: an article published in The New York Times and types of legal documents

Feedback

I would say to work on your prepositions in particular and try to learn some more natural ways to express your ideas.
I think in the future avoid the structure of "the first step, the second step" as it sounds a little stiff and maybe learning some more conectores logicos might help.
Also please tell me if you didn't understand any of what I said, and I'd be more than happy to explain in English or Spanish! My Spanish is not super good (which is why I didn't correct in it) but I don't mind clarifying words you might not understand in my correction.
best of luck in the future, and have a nice day. <3

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galoarellano1987

Oct. 22, 2024

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Thank you

Some strategies for improve my skills


Some strategies forto improve my skills

Some strategies forto improve my skills

As I am looking for a new job, I need to improve my speaking and listening in English.


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AsSince I am looking for a new job,; I need to improve my speaking and listening in English.

As I am looking for a new job, and I need to improve my ability to speaking and listening inunderstand English.

English is not my native language, so I decided to apply some strategies for improve me.


English is not my native language, so I've decided to apply some strategies forto help myself improve me.

for improve me --> normally unless you're using the imperative (Example: Help me!), you don't put the subject after the verb like this. You also don't use for/para the same in English as in Spanish, the preposition 'to' before a verb is normally better.

English is not my native language, so I decided to apply some strategies for improve ment.

English is not my native language, so I decided to applydopt some strategies forto improve me.it.

My first step is writing every day in this plattform.


My first step is writing every day ion this plattform.

you could say "writing daily" too :)

My first step is writing every day ion this plattform.

My second step is save my voice with my phone, for example every night i must save everything I did in the day.


My second step is saveto record my voice withon my phone, f. For example, every night iI must savetalk about everything I did in thethat day.

I feel as though this sentence would sound better split in two or reformulate.

My second step is save my voice with my phone, for example every night i must sato record myself with my phone and go over everything that I did in thethat day.

My second step is saverecord my voice withon my phone, f. For example every night iI must saverecord everything I did in thethat day.

My third step is chating with my friends Rene and Julian.


My third step is chatting with my friends Rene and Julian.

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The fourd step is listening every day or watch series with subtitles, however watching series with subtitles seems to me a few strange, because my tendence is reading rather than listening.


The fourdth step is listening every day to (SOMETHING) or watching series with subtitles, h. However, watching series with subtitles seems to me a fewa bit strange, because myI tendence is to reading rather than listening.

You need to specify what you're listening to. When using verbs with -ing ending in a list, they all have the same ending/conjugation. (Ex: I like reading, walking my dog, listening to music.) No need to add 'me', but you could say 'I personally find watching series with subtitles a bit strange' if you want to give an opinion few is used for things that you can count (A few days, A few books). Use 'a bit' or 'a little' instead I think you meant in the last part that you tend to read the subtitles and not focus on what is being said, however I'm not sure. Also tendence is not a word used in modern English. You can use the verb and say (I tend to.....) or say (I have a tendency to...)

The fourdth step is listening every dayto, or watch series with subtitles everyday, however, watching series with subtitles seems to me a fewbit strange, because my tendence is. I tend to reading rather than listening(*) .

(*) it would be best to add something at the end here. for example, " i tend to read rather than listen to youtube". if you leave it like that it feels awkward

The fourdth step is listening every day or watching a series with subtitles, h. However, watching a series with subtitles seems to me a fewa bit strange, because my tendencey is to reading the subtitles rather than listening.

The last step is practice speaking with another people, but currently in my country the electrical service is out when I get home.


The last step is to practice speaking with another people, but currently in my country the electrical service isity is currently out when I get home.

I would say "by the time I get home" would be more natural. Also really sorry to hear that, power outages suck. :/

The last step is practice speaking with another people, bu. I am not currently in my country the electrical service is out when I get homeable to use the internet because of a power outage in my area.

The last step is practice speaking with another peoplerson, but currently in my country, the electrical serviceity is out when I get home.

By this situation, I will practice speaking only the weekend.


By this situationecause of this, I will practice speaking only theon weekends.

you can't ever say 'by this situation' --> if you want to use this word, replace it with "Due to this situation" However because of this is more informal, natural, and easier to use

Byecause of this situation,; I will practice speaking only the weekend.

Byecause of this situation, I will practicse speaking only over the weekend.

Thank you for reading this article.


Thank you for reading this articlepost.

article is really only used for newspapers (ex: an article published in The New York Times and types of legal documents

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

God bless you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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