yesterday
Some Images outside a High-speed Train Window
I found several videos I captured on my way to Quanzhou while cleaning out my iPhone's storage.
I didn't want to just delete them, so I edited them together to this one: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s8oWvkxJr0M
IF there are any English mistakes, please let me know.
By the way, I've noticed that the best way to maintain a habit is to do it every day. Once you miss a day, you might forget the habit totally.
Some Images outside a High-sSpeed Train Window
I found several videos I captured on my way to Quanzhou while cleaning out my iPhone's storage.
I didn't want to just delete them, so I edited them together to this one: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s8oWvkxJr0M
IFf there are any Englishgrammatical mistakes, please let me know.
Alternatively: "Mistakes with the English"
By the way, I've noticed that the best way to maintain a habit is to do it every day.
Once you miss a day, you might forget the habit totally.
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The capitalisation of the title is inconsistent. You may choose to either uncapitalise everything as I have done, or capitalise everything like so: "Some Images of Outside a High-Speed Train Window". For longer and more descriptive titles such as this one, I personally prefer the former. This is what you will see journalists do when writing news articles.
I found several videos I'd captured on my way to Quanzhou while cleaning out my iPhone's storage.
The event of you capturing the videos occurred before another past event (you finding the videos). Hence, the past perfect tense is expected here.
I didn't want to just delete them, so I edited them together into this one: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s8oWvkxJr0M
IFf there are any English mistakes, please let me know.
I'm not sure if you meant to capitalise all of "if".
By the way, I've noticed that the best way to maintain a habit is to do it every day.
Once you miss a day, you might forget the habit totalcompletely.
I think "completely" sounds more natural at the end of a sentence.
Feedback
Concerning English mistakes in the video you linked:
At 0:27, you wrote "when I raise my phone". However, the past tense should be used instead: "when I RAISED my phone".
yesterday
Thank you so much for such detailed feedback and corrections!
Have a nice day!
IFf there are any English mistakes, please let me know.
yesterday
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Some Images outside a High-speed Train Window
I found several videos I captured on my way to Quanzhou while cleaning out my iPhone's storage.
I didn't want to just delete them, so I edited them together into this one: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s8oWvkxJr0M
IFf there are any English mistakes, please let me know.
By the way, I've noticed that the best way to maintain a habit is to do it every day.
Once you miss a day, you might forget the habit totally.
Feedback
Nice video, and great job with the voice-over!
A few pointers:
1) “images” - the emphasis should be on the first syllable
2) “Fujian province” - the “P” should be capitalized
3) “I raise my phone” - “raise” should be “raised”
4) “totally different from this different angle” - you could say “from this perspective” (just a suggestion, not an error)
Thanks for sharing this video. I really enjoyed seeing those views.
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