Feb. 1, 2023
Some Changes About an Island
The first map illustrates an original island with only some trees and a beach while the second one presents some changes to a refurnished island by developing attractive buildings and places to draw a lot of tourists.
The island was previously empty without any basic structures, but now, a number of facilities have been built to provide a wide variety of services for tourists. The reception is in the east of the whole island, linked with a restaurant to the north by vehicle tracks. Several accommodation cottages are located on both sides of the reception, connected with each other by footpaths.
A pier is sited on the south end, also linked to the reception by a vehicle track. Not only will this pier attract more tourists to yacht there, but also it gives yachts some places to berth. There will be a swimming area next to the beach to the western tip of the whole re-developed island.
Overall, the island will be added various kinds of facilities to meet people’s all sorts of needs in the foreseeable future, including accommodation, swimming, dining and yachting.
Some Cchanges Aabout an Island
Normally you would not capitalise all the words. Just the important words
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The island was previously empty without any basic structures, but now, a number of facilities have been built to provide a wide variety of services for tourists.
The reception is ion the east side of the whole island, linked withto a restaurant toin the north a restaurant by vehicle tracks.
Several accommodation cottages are located on both sides of the reception, connected withto each other by footpaths.
A pier is situated on the southern end, also linked to the reception by a vehicle track.
Not only will this pier attract more tourists to yachtcome there, but also it gives yachts some places to berth.
There will be a swimming area next to the beach to the western tip of the whole re-developed island.
Overall, the island will be addeadd various kinds of facilities to meet people’s all sorts of needs in the foreseeable future, including accommodation, swimming, dining and yachting.
Feb. 2, 2023
Thanks for your corrections！
Some Changes Abouton an Island
"On" sounds better in this case.
The first map illustrates an original island with only some trees and a beach while the second one presents some changes to a refurnished island by developing attractive buildings and places to draw a lot of tourists.
The island was previously empty without any basic structures, but now, a number of facilities have been built to provide a wide variety of services for tourists.
The reception is in the east of the whole island, linked with a restaurant to the north by vehicle tracks.
Several accommodation cottages are located on both sides of the reception, connected with each other by footpaths.
A pier is siteds on the south end, also linked to the reception by a vehicle track.
Not only will this pier attract more tourists to yacht there, but also it gives yachts some places to berth.
While "yacht" is a verb, I've never heard it used before. You'd probably be better off saying "to use a yacht"
There will be a swimming area next to the beach to the western tip of the whole re-developed island.
Overall, the island will be added various kinds of facilities to meet people’s all sorts of needs in the foreseeable future, including accommodation, swimming, dining and yachting.
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Feb. 2, 2023
Thanks!
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