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Tammy

June 17, 2024

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Some change in myself

I found some change in myself this morning.

I was analyzing data with Tableau -- a useful tool for data analysis. Then I found it difficult to upload data for a long time. After considering a few seconds, I changed to use Excel to finish the work.

If this kind of thing happened a few months ago, I would feel angry and complain to my coworkers. But now, I think about the solution and keep going to the next steps.

Maybe it's because I have found that anger and complaints do not help at all, and they may cause some misunderstandings among clients.


今天早上发现自己有些变化。

我在用Tableau分析数据,这是一个很有用的数据分析工具。然后我发现上传数据在很长一段时间都很困难。考虑了几秒钟后,我改用Excel来完成工作。

如果这种事情发生在几个月前,我会很生气,向同事抱怨。但现在,我思考解决方案,然后继续下一步。

也许是因为我发现愤怒和抱怨根本没有帮助,还可能让客户误会。

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S如果有多个更改:Noticing some changes in myself

I founnoticed some changes in myself this morning.

I was analyzing some data with Tableau -- a useful tool for data analysis.

Then I found it difficult to upload data for a long time.

After considering a few seconds, I changed to use Excel to finish the work.

If this kind of thing happened a few months ago, I would fhave beeln angry and complained to my coworkers.

But now, I think about tha possible solution and keept going to the next steps.

Maybe it's because I have founI have discovered that anger and complaints do not help at all, andnyone at all. In fact, they may cause some misunderstandings among clients.

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Great! You are think strategically. At times it is wise to express angry. However, at other times it does not help anyone.

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Tammy

June 21, 2024

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Thank you so much!

SomeA change in myself

I found somenoticed a change in myself this morning.

I was analyzing data with Tableau --, a useful tool for data analysis.

Then I found itIt was difficult to upload data forand took a long time.

Saying "I found" makes it seem like you were having a problem, but I think the problem was with Tableau based on your story. That's what these changes reflect. If they are wrong, ignore them!

After considering a few seconds, I changed to use Excel to finish the work.

If this kind of thing happened a few months ago, I would feel angry and complain to my coworkers.

But now, I think about the solution and keep goingo to the next steps.

Maybe it's because I have found that anger and complaints do not help at all, and they may cause some misunderstandings among clients.

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Tammy

June 18, 2024

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Thanks for your corrections and feedback!

Some change in myself

Suggestion: A change in myself

Your original is possible but not very natural

I found somea change in myself this morning.

I was analyzing data with Tableau --, a useful tool for data analysis.

Then I found it difficult to upload data for a long time.realized that it had become difficult to upload data, and this situation had persisted for a long time.¶

Suggestion: ¶
Then I realized data uploads were taking an unacceptably long time.

If by “difficult to upload data” you mean it was slow, it would be more natural to say so explicitly. Otherwise, it sounds like something else besides slowness was causing this “difficulty.”

After considering (for) a few seconds, I changed to use/switched to Excel to finish the work.

If this kind of thing had happened a few months ago, I would have feelt angry and complained to my coworkers.

But now, I think about the solution and [keep going to | proceed with] the next steps.

Maybe it's because I have found that anger and complaints do not help at all, and they may cause some misunderstandings among client(even) cause confusion among our clients / cause our clients to misunderstand us.

“Misunderstandings among clients” sounds like the clients misunderstand each other.

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Tammy

June 18, 2024

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非常感谢!又学到了!

Some cChange in mMyself

I found some change in myself this morning.

I was analyzing data with Tableau -- a useful tool for data analysis.

Then I found it difficult to upload the data for a long timquite a while.

After consideringtemplating for a few seconds, I changed to use Excel to finish the work.

If this kind of thing happened a few months ago, I would feel angry and complain to my coworkers.

But now, I think about the solution and keep goworking towards the next steps. in solving said issue.

Maybe it's because I have found that anger and complaints do not help at all, and they may cause some misunderstandings amongwith clients.

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Tammy

June 17, 2024

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Thanks for your corrections!

I Noticed Some cChanges in mMyself

I found/discovered some changes in myself this morning.

I was analyzing data with Tableau --, a useful tool for data analysis.

Then I found it difficult to upload data for a long time.

After considering a few seconds, I changed to use Excel to finish the work.

If this kind of thing happened a few months ago, I would feel angry and complain to my coworkers.

But now, I think about the solution and keep going to the next steps.

Maybe it's because I have found that anger and complaints do not help at all, and they may cause some misunderstandings among clients.

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Tammy

June 17, 2024

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Thank you so much!

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marblemenow

June 17, 2024

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You're welcome.

I found somenoticed a change in myself this morning..

Then I found it difficult to upload data for a long time.It was taking too long to upload the data.

If this kind of thing had happened a few months ago, I would have feelt angry and complained to my coworkers.

But now, I think about the solution and keep going to the next steps.

Maybe it's because I have found that anger and complaints do not help at all, and they may cause some misunderstandings among clients.

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

June 17, 2024

1

Thank you for the corrections!

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mfrenette

June 17, 2024

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My pleasure! :)

Some change in myself

I found some change in myself this morning.

I was analyzing data with Tableau --, a useful tool for data analysis.

Then I found it difficult to upload data for, since it took a long time.

After considering for a few seconds, I changswitched to use Excel to finish the work.

If this kind of thing happened a few months ago, I would feel angry and complain to my coworkers.

But now, I think about the solution and keep going to the next steps.

Maybe it's because I have found that anger and complaints do not help at all, and they may cause some misunderstandings among clients.

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Well written! Always great to see growth in ourselves :)

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

June 17, 2024

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Thank you!

Yes! Let's keep striving for better✌

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Maybe it's because I have found that anger and complaints do not help at all, and they may cause some misunderstandings amongwith clients.

Maybe it's because I have found that anger and complaints do not help at all, and they may cause some misunderstandings among client(even) cause confusion among our clients / cause our clients to misunderstand us.

“Misunderstandings among clients” sounds like the clients misunderstand each other.

Maybe it's because I have found that anger and complaints do not help at all, and they may cause some misunderstandings among clients.

Maybe it's because I have founI have discovered that anger and complaints do not help at all, andnyone at all. In fact, they may cause some misunderstandings among clients.

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