Oct. 28, 2021
some bad feelings
I tend to escape from my feelings at most of time in my life, which is a very terrible habit.
Two week ago, I lost my job. The company fired the whole department in my city. I, joined with another approximately 400 people lost job.
At the same time, I was applying to a university in Canada. The admission decision had been delayed and I haven't received the result.
I tried to repress my fear and anxiety to the uncertainty, and pretended that I was totally fine and everything was okay.
As a result, I began procrastinating. I took days to update my resume and another some day to apply jobs.
The interview I attended yesterday was not good. The interviewer thought I was not good at all and my level was not good enough compared to my work experience. I was hurt by his behavior although I knew that some of his points was right. I am not that good at the job. I am scared to have more interviews.
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I tend to escape from my feelings at most of the time in my life, which is a very terrible habit.
Two weeks ago, I lost my job.
The company fired the whole department in my city.
I, joined with another approximately 400 other people lostwho also lost their jobs.
At the same time, I was applying to a university in Canada.
The admission decision had been delayed and I haven't received the result.
I tried to repress my fear and anxiety due to the uncertainty, and pretended that I was totally fine and everything was okay.
As a result, I began procrastinating.
I took days to update my resume and another somefew days to apply to some jobs.
The interview I attended yesterday wasdid not good well.
The interviewer thought I was not good at all and my level was not good enough compared to my work experience.
I was hurt by his behavior although I knew that some of his points wasere right.
I am not that good at theis job.
I am scared tof haveing more interviews.
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Your English is very good, just a couple of minor mistakes.
Oct. 28, 2021
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some bad feelings
Capitalize most words in titles |
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I tend to escape from my feelings at most of time in my life, which is a very terrible habit. I tend to escape from my feelings |
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Two week ago, I lost my job. Two weeks ago, I lost my job. |
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The company fired the whole department in my city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I, joined with another approximately 400 people lost job. I |
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At the same time, I was applying to a university in Canada. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The admission decision had been delayed and I haven't received the result. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I tried to repress my fear and anxiety to the uncertainty, and pretended that I was totally fine and everything was okay. I tried to repress my fear and anxiety due to the uncertainty |
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As a result, I began procrastinating. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I took days to update my resume and another some day to apply jobs. I took days to update my resume and another |
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The interview I attended yesterday was not good. The interview I attended yesterday |
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The interviewer thought I was not good at all and my level was not good enough compared to my work experience. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was hurt by his behavior although I knew that some of his points was right. I was hurt by his behavior although I knew that some of his points w |
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I am not that good at the job. I am not that good at th |
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I am scared to have more interviews. I am scared |
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