July 29, 2020
Soft Power
The motorcade dashing along the half-empty streets of Pyengmeawng.
They must be in time.
The fate of humankind depends on her.
Every time when an excruciating pain strikes the ruthless dictator’s back more and more often he comes with an idea to push his own red button and share his insufferable pain with the rest of the world.
They must be in time.
Sitting on a comfy limo backseat, master Meow Shi stays calm. Being exempted from any rat race in her life, over the years she obtains the indisputable skill of kneading- the art that now can save human lives.
Having understood that, she uses her soft power wisely, not only mitigating tyrant’s lower back pain and heart, but also thwarting gruesome plans to throw the world into the utter chaos of a nuclear warfare.
Soft Power
The fate of humankind depends on her.
Sitting oin athe comfy limo backseat of a limo, mMaster Meow Shi stays calm.
Honorifics like "master" should be capitalized when written right before a name. Read about it here:
https://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/when-should-you-capitalize-titles
Being exempted from anythe rat race inall her life, over the years she has obtainsed the indisputable skill of kneading - the art that now can save human lives.
The motorcade is dashing along the half-empty streets of Pyengmeawng.
They must be ion time.
The fate of humankind depends on her.
Every time whenthat an excruciating pain strikes the ruthless dictator’s back more and more often he comes with anto the idea tof pushing his own red button and shareing his insufferable pain with the rest of the world more and more often.
They must be ion time.
Sitting on the backseat of a comfy limo backseat, master Meow Shi stays calm.
Being exempted from anythe rat race in her life, over the years she has obtainsed the indisputable skill of kneadingmassage- the art that now can save human lives.
Having understood that, she uses her soft power wisely, not only mitigating the tyrant’s lower back pain and heart pain, but also thwarting gruesome plans to throw the world into the utter chaos of a nuclear warfare.
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July 30, 2020
Being exempted from anythe rat race in her life, over the years she has obtainsed the indisputable skill of kneadingmassage- the art that now can save human lives.
Kneading here is crucial word here, because the action takes place in some kind of imaginary world, where cats (in this case Master Meow Shi) may have an impact on world politics. I'm sure you've herd about kneading cats.
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The motorcade dashing along the half-empty streets of Pyengmeawng. The motorcade is dashing along the half-empty streets of Pyengmeawng. |
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They must be in time. They must be |
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The fate of humankind depends on her. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every time when an excruciating pain strikes the ruthless dictator’s back more and more often he comes with an idea to push his own red button and share his insufferable pain with the rest of the world. Every time |
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They must be in time. They must be |
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Sitting on a comfy limo backseat, master Meow Shi stays calm. Sitting on the backseat of a comfy limo Sitting Honorifics like "master" should be capitalized when written right before a name. Read about it here: https://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/when-should-you-capitalize-titles |
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Being exempted from any rat race in her life, over the years she obtains the indisputable skill of kneading- the art that now can save human lives. Being exempt Being exempt |
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Having understood that, she uses her soft power wisely, not only mitigating tyrant’s lower back pain and heart, but also thwarting gruesome plans to throw the world into the utter chaos of a nuclear warfare. Having understood that, she uses her soft power wisely, not only mitigating the tyrant’s lower back |
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