Oct. 23, 2022
I read an article about Spotify and people their music taste in general. The author points out that the for example the algorithms are quite unable to show us new music, broaden our taste. But instead of saying the algorithms are wrong he leads the reader to the thesis, that we are overwhelmed with so much music that we do not care about the music, as "we" did years ago.
He is leading the reader into this thesis through several steps. At first, he started with the hype of Kate Bush's song "Running up that hill", which was only possible and only through the Netflix series "Stranger Things". Also, Kate Bush was totally overwhelmed with her new lead at world music charts and streaming statistics. For the author, this unbelievable success of Kate Bush is more. For him, this is a symbol of how "we" consume music.
So the next question to give arguments about is "what is the present way of consuming music?" At this point the author mentions, that we are greatly over-saturated, because there is so much music, so we aren't able to listen to all of it. We have, e.g. at Spotify People we can follow, AI-generated music-lists, Genre-Lists, Mood-based-lists, well a divers set of methods to give us new music, discover the mountain of possibilities.
At this point of his argumentation, he comes to the question, why do we have such great success of some artists, though we have so much more artists and music we could listen to and be more divers in our tastes?
He concluded this argument with the thesis:
We are narrowed down in our taste through the unbelievable number of possibilities of songs at streaming services for music, like Spotify.
For me and for my profession comes the question: When the author's assumption is true; that we are narrowed down through the sheer amount of music can we say it about other stuff that is now, in the modern age of the internet, present in such sheer amount? What does it mean for "information" in general, e.g. on the internet, and that we are not able to see all perspectives to a topic or all sources of a specific issue? Do "humans" switching off their individualism and brain caused by being overwhelmed?
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For me and for my profession comes the question: When the author's assumption is true; that we are narrowed down through the sheer amount of music can we say it about other stuff that is now, in the modern age of the internet, present in such sheer amount?
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Your piece of writing is a little unclear. There is an attempt at crafting complex sentences but it's a little difficult to understand the message that you're trying to convey. You can rewrite it in a more concise manner and post it again. But good try and keep writing! :)
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Very interesting! Good job writing, everything was very understandable. This reminds me a lot of a study I saw: https://medium.com/@FlorentGeerts/the-jam-experiment-how-choice-overloads-makes-consumers-buy-less-d610f8c37b9b (or you can google "jam study" or "jam experiment").
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We have, e.g. at Spotify People we can follow, AI-generated music-lists, Genre-Lists, Mood-based-lists, well a divers set of methods to give us new music, discover the mountain of possibilities.
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We are narrowed down in our taste through the unbelievable number of possibilities of songs at streaming services for music, like Spotify.
We are narrowed down in our taste through the unbelievable number of possibilities of songs at streaming services for music, like Spotify. I don't understand. |
For me and for my profession comes the question: When the author's assumption is true; that we are narrowed down through the sheer amount of music can we say it about other stuff that is now, in the modern age of the internet, present in such sheer amount? For me and for my profession comes the question: For me and for my profession comes the question: When the author's assumption is true; that we are narrowed down through the sheer amount of music can we say it about other stuff that is now, in the modern age of the internet, present in such sheer amount? I don't understand. |
What does it mean for "information" in general, e.g. on the internet, and that we are not able to see all perspectives to a topic or all sources of a specific issue? What does it mean for What does it mean for "information" in general, e.g. on the internet, and that we are not able to see all perspectives to a topic or all sources of a specific issue? I don't understand. |
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