July 26, 2025
We all know that Human being are social animal, And we need to live in society to survive and grow. But to survive in the society, We need some basic requirement such as food, shelter and clothing. Beyond that, we also need extra requirements to live our life peacefully. these include love and relationships, healthcare ,education, security, freedom, respect and many more. Overall we can say that to live, we need both physical needs and emotional needs.
We all know that Hhuman beings are social animals, Aand we need to live in society to survive and grow.
1. When talking about broad trends of a collective, we use the plural form "human beings", "social animals" etc.
2. English doesn't capitalise words after commas.
ButHowever, to survive in the society, Wwe need some basic requirements such as food, shelter and clothing.
It's considered bad style to start a sentence with "but" in formal writing. "However" is the usual replacement.
tThese include love and relationships, healthcare , education, security, freedom, respect and many moreothers.
Just sounds more natural to say "many others" rather than "many more" here.
Overall we can say that to live, we needhave both physical needs and emotional needs.
"have" sounds better here as it's less repetitive than "need ... needs".
Society
We all know that Hhuman beings are social animals, Aand we need to live in a society to survive and grow.
ButIn order to survive in the society, Wwe need some basic requirementour necessities such as food, shelter, and clothing.
Beyond that, we also need extra requirementthings to live our life peacefully, including love, relationships, healthcare, education, security, freedom, and more.
these include love and relationships, healthcare ,education, security, freedom, respect and many more.
I combined this sentence with the last one.
Overall, we can say that in order to live, we need bothto have our physical needs and emotional needs met.
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Society
We all know that Hhuman beings are social animals, Aand that we need to live in society to survive and grow.
You're talking about multiple (all) human beings so the phrase should be plural. The H in human does not need to be capital since it is not a proper noun in this context.
The only punctuation that requires you to capitalize the first letter of a word is a period (.) and since you used a comma the a should be lowercase.
But to survive in the society, Wwe need some basic requirements such as food, shelter, and clothing.
Added s to the end of requirement to pluralize the word since you list multiple examples of requirements.
The comma I added after shelter is called an Oxford comma; the last comma placed before a conjunction ("and") in a list of three and more items. It is technically optional, so "food, shelter and clothing." is grammatically correct, however, most people are taught to use it and would agree that it provides more clarity.
Beyond that, we also need extra requirements to live our lifeves peacefully.
tThese include love and relationships, healthcare , education, security, freedom, respect and many more.
Capitalize the T in "these" since it's the start of a new sentence. As I mentioned above, you can choose to put a comma before "and many more" since it is the last item in the list or you can choose not to. I respect your right to not put a comma there haha
Overall, we can say that to live, we need both physical needs and emotional needs to be met.
"we can say that to live, we need both physical needs and emotional needs." comes across as if you're saying humans must to acquire or develop physical and emotional needs in order to live, despite mentioning above that physical and emotional needs are innately human; all humans are born with/possess these needs. What you're trying to say is that these physical and emotional needs we possess must be *satisfied* for society for survive and grow; in order to live, our needs must be met.
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Great work!
Society
We all know that Hhuman beings are social animals, Aand that we need to live in society to survive and grow.
But to survive in the society, Wwe need some basic requirements such as food, shelter and clothing.
Beyond that, we also need extra requirements to live our life peacefully.
tThese include love and relationships, healthcare , education, security, freedom, respect and many more.
Overall we can say that to live, we needhave both physical needs and emotional needs.
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We all know that Human being are social animal, And we need to live in society to survive and grow. We all know that We all know that You're talking about multiple (all) human beings so the phrase should be plural. The H in human does not need to be capital since it is not a proper noun in this context. The only punctuation that requires you to capitalize the first letter of a word is a period (.) and since you used a comma the a should be lowercase. We all know that We all know that 1. When talking about broad trends of a collective, we use the plural form "human beings", "social animals" etc. 2. English doesn't capitalise words after commas. |
But to survive in the society, We need some basic requirement such as food, shelter and clothing. But to survive in But to survive in Added s to the end of requirement to pluralize the word since you list multiple examples of requirements. The comma I added after shelter is called an Oxford comma; the last comma placed before a conjunction ("and") in a list of three and more items. It is technically optional, so "food, shelter and clothing." is grammatically correct, however, most people are taught to use it and would agree that it provides more clarity.
It's considered bad style to start a sentence with "but" in formal writing. "However" is the usual replacement. |
Beyond that, we also need extra requirements to live our life peacefully. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Beyond that, we also need extra requirements to live our li Beyond that, we also need extra |
these include love and relationships, healthcare ,education, security, freedom, respect and many more.
Capitalize the T in "these" since it's the start of a new sentence. As I mentioned above, you can choose to put a comma before "and many more" since it is the last item in the list or you can choose not to. I respect your right to not put a comma there haha
I combined this sentence with the last one.
Just sounds more natural to say "many others" rather than "many more" here. |
Overall we can say that to live, we need both physical needs and emotional needs. Overall we can say that to live, we Overall, we can say that to live, we need both physical needs and emotional needs to be met. "we can say that to live, we need both physical needs and emotional needs." comes across as if you're saying humans must to acquire or develop physical and emotional needs in order to live, despite mentioning above that physical and emotional needs are innately human; all humans are born with/possess these needs. What you're trying to say is that these physical and emotional needs we possess must be *satisfied* for society for survive and grow; in order to live, our needs must be met. Overall, we can say that in order to live, we need Overall we can say that to live, we "have" sounds better here as it's less repetitive than "need ... needs". |
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