Aug. 8, 2020
Social Networks!
Do you use social networks?
There are many social networks that are popular around the world. The most popular are Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter. Every minute the number of users of these websites increases and adds to millions of users.
From 2015 to 2017, I was addicted to Facebook. I would post a photo of me every day. I used to wait for my friends to like my photos and comment. Later, I understood that I was using too much Facebook because I was feeling alone. Back then, I was in Japan and I was new there. I had no friends that resulted in using Facebook excessively. When I made new friends, I was no longer addicted to Facebook.
Social Networks!
Social networks is correct, but people usually say "social media".
Do you use social networks?
There are many social networks that are popular around the world.
The most popular are Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter.
Every minute the number of users of these websites increases, and addsdding to millions of users.
From 2015 to 2017, I was addicted to Facebook.
I would post a photo of meyself every day.
I used to wait for my friends to like my photos and comment.
Later, I understood that I was using too much FacebookFacebook too much because I was feeling alone.
Back then, I was in Japan and I was new there.
I had no friends and that resulted in using Facebook excessively.
When I made new friends, I was no longer addicted to Facebook.
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I used social media a lot until one or two years ago. I was addicted too, but it was because I enjoyed keeping up with all my friends! Now, I just talk to them directly. I save more time and it's a little more fun for me too!
Aug. 9, 2020
Thanks a lot for the correction! Yes, when you can meet your friends in person, there is no point to use social media. I am once again far away from family and friends, but I am not using too much Facebook.
Social NetworksMedia!
"Social network" is technically correct, but people use "social media" more when referring to apps/websites such as Facebook, Twitter, LINE, etc.
Do you use social networksing sites/social media?
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The most popular are Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter.
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"Millions upon millions" can infer that more and more people are joining constantly.
From 2015 to 2017, I was addicted to Facebook.
I would post a photo of meyself every day.
I used to wait for my friends to like my photos and comment.
Later, I understood that I was using too much Facebookused Facebook too much because I was feeling alone.
Back then, I was in Japan and I was new therenew to Japan/recently moved to Japan.
I had no friends that, which resulted in me using Facebook excessively.
When I made new friends, I was no longer addicted to Facebook.
Aug. 9, 2020
Thanks a lot for your help!
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