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mimi_fr_04

Aug. 4, 2025

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In the past, I used to be addicted by social media and watch stupid thing, just scrolling and scrolling. But I was always feeling boring and the content become familier, nothing is new. So, I decided to try some other contents that I used to ignore them. I relised that I'm interesting in contents about self care, developping divers skills. I started to focus on my self and improve it, identify my goals and pursu it. At the meantime I have no intention to use social media and waste my time. I'm only consider my dream and work on it.

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In the past, I used to be addicted byto social media and watchlook at stupid thing,s, and just scrolling and scrolling.

But I was always feeling boringbored and the content becoame familier, nothing is newar.

So, I decided to try somelook at other contents that I used to ignore them.

I realiszed that I'm was interestinged in contents about self care, and developping diverse(?)/new(?) skills.

I started to focus on my self and improve it,on self improvement. I started to identify my goals, and pursu it.determine how to pursue them.

AtIn the meantime, I have no intention to uses of using social media and wasteing my time.

I'm only considering my dream and working on it.

Or, “…my dream and pursuing it.”

Feedback

Your writing is very fluent and you express yourself well.

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In the past, I used to be addicted byto social media and watch stupid things, just scrolling and scrolling.

In correct English, we use the phrase “addicted to” because “to” shows the thing or activity someone is dependent on. On the other hand, “by” is not correct in this context, as it implies something causes addiction, not what someone is addicted to.

Also thing +s. You probably watched more then one.

But I was always feeling boringed, and the content becoame familier,ar; nothing iwas new.

Use “bored” instead of “boring” when you talk about your own feeling.
• Use “became” (past tense of “become”) because you’re talking about something that changed in the past.
• “Familiar” is spelled with one “i” after the “m.”
• It’s better to use a semicolon or a period between two complete thoughts.

So, I decided to try some other contents that I used to ignore them.

Content” is usually uncountable, so no need to say “contents.”
• You don’t need “them” because “content” already covers it.

I realiszed that I'm interestinged in contents about self -care, and developping diverse skills.

• “Realized” has one “s.”
• Use “interested in” (not “interesting in”) when you talk about what you like.
• “Content” is uncountable, so no “contents.”
• “Self-care” is hyphenated.
• “Developing” (with one “p”).
• “Diverse” means various or different (better than “divers”).

I started to focus on my self and, improve itmyself, identify my goals, and pursu ite them.

• Use “myself” (one word) instead of “my self.”
• Repeat “myself” after “improve” for clarity.
• The verb is “pursue” (not “pursu”).
• Add “them” after “pursue” to refer to the goals.

AtIn the meantime, I have no intention tof useing social media and wasteing my time.

• Use “In the meantime” instead of “At the meantime.”
• Say “no intention of using” (not “to use”).
• Use “wasting” (gerund) to match “using.”

I'm only considering my dream and working on it.

Feedback

Your writing shows great effort and your ideas are clear, which is the most important part! The main areas for improvement are small grammar points and word choice to make your English sound more natural and fluent.

What you’re doing well:
• Expressing your thoughts clearly
• Using the right verbs and concepts mostly
• Structuring sentences logically

What could be improved:
• Correct use of prepositions (e.g., “addicted to,” “intention of”)
• Verb forms and tenses (e.g., “became,” “pursue”)
• Word choice and spelling (e.g., “interested,” “diverse,” “myself”)
• Avoiding extra or unnecessary words (like “contents” instead of “content”)

If you keep practicing and polishing like this, your English will become more natural and polished in no time!

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In the past, I used to be addicted by social media and watch stupid thing, just scrolling and scrolling.


In the past, I used to be addicted byto social media and watch stupid things, just scrolling and scrolling.

In correct English, we use the phrase “addicted to” because “to” shows the thing or activity someone is dependent on. On the other hand, “by” is not correct in this context, as it implies something causes addiction, not what someone is addicted to. Also thing +s. You probably watched more then one.

In the past, I used to be addicted byto social media and watchlook at stupid thing,s, and just scrolling and scrolling.

But I was always feeling boring and the content become familier, nothing is new.


But I was always feeling boringed, and the content becoame familier,ar; nothing iwas new.

Use “bored” instead of “boring” when you talk about your own feeling. • Use “became” (past tense of “become”) because you’re talking about something that changed in the past. • “Familiar” is spelled with one “i” after the “m.” • It’s better to use a semicolon or a period between two complete thoughts.

But I was always feeling boringbored and the content becoame familier, nothing is newar.

So, I decided to try some other contents that I used to ignore them.


So, I decided to try some other contents that I used to ignore them.

Content” is usually uncountable, so no need to say “contents.” • You don’t need “them” because “content” already covers it.

So, I decided to try somelook at other contents that I used to ignore them.

I relised that I'm interesting in contents about self care, developping divers skills.


I realiszed that I'm interestinged in contents about self -care, and developping diverse skills.

• “Realized” has one “s.” • Use “interested in” (not “interesting in”) when you talk about what you like. • “Content” is uncountable, so no “contents.” • “Self-care” is hyphenated. • “Developing” (with one “p”). • “Diverse” means various or different (better than “divers”).

I realiszed that I'm was interestinged in contents about self care, and developping diverse(?)/new(?) skills.

I started to focus on my self and improve it, identify my goals and pursu it.


I started to focus on my self and, improve itmyself, identify my goals, and pursu ite them.

• Use “myself” (one word) instead of “my self.” • Repeat “myself” after “improve” for clarity. • The verb is “pursue” (not “pursu”). • Add “them” after “pursue” to refer to the goals.

I started to focus on my self and improve it,on self improvement. I started to identify my goals, and pursu it.determine how to pursue them.

At the meantime I have no intention to use social media and waste my time.


AtIn the meantime, I have no intention tof useing social media and wasteing my time.

• Use “In the meantime” instead of “At the meantime.” • Say “no intention of using” (not “to use”). • Use “wasting” (gerund) to match “using.”

AtIn the meantime, I have no intention to uses of using social media and wasteing my time.

I'm only consider my dream and work on it.


I'm only considering my dream and working on it.

I'm only considering my dream and working on it.

Or, “…my dream and pursuing it.”

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