Aug. 1, 2022
Sobs...
I used to enjoyed summer a lot. But now I am an adult with a summer full of hedeaches. I am a bit tired about looking for a job every summer, about not knowing what is going to happen next school year with my life and if I will have enough money to pay bills.
I am sorry with the people reading this text, I really don't want to share bad energies with you but I need to scream somewhere.
Thank you :)
I used to enjoyed summer a lot.
But now I am an adult with a summer full of headeaches.
I am a bit tired aboutof looking for a job every summer, aboutnd not knowing what is going to happen next school year with my life and if I will have enough money to pay bills.
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Hopefully everything will get better. Wish you the best!
Aug. 2, 2022
Thanks a lot!! :)
I used to enjoyed summer a lot.
BI used to enjoyed summer a lot, but now I am an adult with a summer that has left me full of headeaches.
For clarity! Try not to start a sentence with "but" as well.
I am a bit tired aboutof looking for a job every summer, about; of not knowing what is going to happen next school year with my life and ifwith my life during the next school year; and of fretting over whether I will have enough money to pay the bills.
With longer phrases in a list, I would separate with semicolons. Changed the last phrase so that the grammar structure is consistent with the rest.
I am sorry with the peoplto those reading this text,. I really don't want to share bad energiesy with you, but I need to scream somewhere.
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I'm sorry that summers have been so challenging for you. I hope that things get better!
Aug. 2, 2022
Thanks a lot, your corrections and encouragement are very useful :)
I am a bit tired aboutof looking for a job every summer, and about not knowing what is going to happen with my life in the next school year with my life, and if I will have enough money to pay my bills.
I am sorry with the people reading this text, I really don't want to share bad energies with you but I need to scream somewhere.
Don't worry at all! I hope things are better for you soon :)
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Great work, really well written! Only very minor corrections to sound more natural
Aug. 2, 2022
I really apreciate your words and corrections, thank you so much :)
Sobs...
I used to enjoyed summer a lot, but now I am an adult, the summer causes me a lot of headaches.
"But" is a connector, so normally goes in the middle of a sentence.
But now I am an adult with a summer full of hedeaches.
This sounds like you literally get a lot of headaches in the summer.
You could also say "... a summer full of problems"
I am a bit tired aboutof looking for a job every summer, about not knowing what is going to happen next school year with my life andwith my life in the next school year, and about worrying if I will have enough money to pay bills.
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I am sorry withto the people reading this text, I really don't want to share bad energiesy with you, but I need to scream somewhere.
Thank you :)
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I understand, this summer I am also struggling with similar problems. I hope that things get easier for you soon!
Aug. 2, 2022
hope the same for you! thanks a lot for the feedback :)
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I used to enjoyed summer a lot. I used to enjoyed summer a lot, but now I am an adult, the summer causes me a lot of headaches. "But" is a connector, so normally goes in the middle of a sentence.
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But now I am an adult with a summer full of hedeaches.
This sounds like you literally get a lot of headaches in the summer. You could also say "... a summer full of problems"
For clarity! Try not to start a sentence with "but" as well. But now I am an adult with a summer full of head |
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