Feb. 22, 2021
Snowboarding
I went snowboarding with my friend. It was the second time I snowboard, and now I'm sore from the unfamiliar exercise. The friend was born in a snowy region, so he's good at skiing and snowboarding. He told me about snowboarding and I became able to snowboard with regular stance. It was exciting to slide down a slope as I thought. By the way, we went to a ski area by motorbike, and it was hard to change gears because of leg fatigue.
Snowboarding
I went snowboarding with my friend.
It was the second time I snowboarded, and now I'm sore from the unfamiliar exercise.
"It was the second time I went snowboarding" would also sound more natural.
TheMy friend was born in a snowy region, so he's good at skiing and snowboarding.
You would use "The friend" when talking about someone else's friend that is not your friend.
He told me about snowboarding and I became able to snowboard with a regular stance.
It was as exciting to slide down a slope as I thought it would be.
While "It was as exciting to slide down a slope as I thought" could also be used it sounds like the thought is incomplete.
By the way, we went to a ski area by motorbike, and it was hard to change gears because of the leg fatigue.
Feb. 23, 2021
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I went snowboarding with my friend. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was the second time I snowboard, and now I'm sore from the unfamiliar exercise. It was the second time I snowboarded, and now I'm sore from the unfamiliar exercise. "It was the second time I went snowboarding" would also sound more natural. |
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The friend was born in a snowy region, so he's good at skiing and snowboarding.
You would use "The friend" when talking about someone else's friend that is not your friend. |
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He told me about snowboarding and I became able to snowboard with regular stance. He told me about snowboarding and I became able to snowboard with a regular stance. |
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It was exciting to slide down a slope as I thought. It was as exciting to slide down a slope as I thought it would be. While "It was as exciting to slide down a slope as I thought" could also be used it sounds like the thought is incomplete. |
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By the way, we went to a ski area by motorbike, and it was hard to change gears because of leg fatigue. By the way, we went to a ski area by motorbike, and it was hard to change gears because of the leg fatigue. |
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