June 25, 2025
Snow in Vilches
I'm very excited because tomorrow I'm going to the snow with my brother. My father has a cabin in Vilches, which is pretty near to the cordillera of Los Andes. In June of every year me and my brother are used to going to Vilches with our dad, and every time we go it's very fun and enjoyable. Now I need to prepare my backpack with all the things I'll need there.
Estoy muy emocionado porque mañana voy a la nieve con mi hermano. Mi padre tiene una cabaña en Vilches, que está bastante cerca de la cordillera de los Andes. En junio de cada año, mi hermano y yo solemos ir a Vilches con nuestro papá, y cada vez que vamos es muy divertido y agradable. Ahora necesito preparar mi mochila con todas las cosas que voy a necesitar allá.
Snow in Vilches
I'm very excited because tomorrow, I'm going to the snow with my brother.
My father has a cabin in Vilches, which is pretty near to the cordillera of Los Andes.
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Now I need to prepare my backpack with all the things I'll need there.
I'm very excited because tomorrow I'm going to [verb] the snow with my brother tomorrow.
The timing should go at the start or end of the sentence.
Also, it’s not typical to use “the snow” as a place. It is more natural to use a verb before “snow” or a different word instead.
My father has a cabin in Vilches, which is pretty nearvery close to the cordillera of Losthe Andes.
Use “close” instead of “near.” Alternatively, you can say “which is near the Andes.”
The word “Cordillera” is usually only used in academia but is technically correct
In June of every year me and my brother are used to goingEvery June my brother and I go to Vilches with our dad, and every time we go it's very fun and enjoyable is a lot of fun.
“Very fun and enjoyable” repeats the same idea. You only need to use “fun” or “enjoyable.”
Alternatively, “and we enjoy it every time.”
Now, I need to prepareack my backpack with all the everythings I'll need there.
The verb “to pack” is more appropriate here.
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I'm very excited because tomorrow I'm going to the snow with my brother. I'm very excited because The timing should go at the start or end of the sentence. Also, it’s not typical to use “the snow” as a place. It is more natural to use a verb before “snow” or a different word instead. I'm very excited because tomorrow, I'm going to the snow with my brother. |
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My father has a cabin in Vilches, which is pretty near to the cordillera of Los Andes. My father has a cabin in Vilches, which is Use “close” instead of “near.” Alternatively, you can say “which is near the Andes.” The word “Cordillera” is usually only used in academia but is technically correct My father has a cabin in Vilches, which is pretty near |
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In June of every year me and my brother are used to going to Vilches with our dad, and every time we go it's very fun and enjoyable.
“Very fun and enjoyable” repeats the same idea. You only need to use “fun” or “enjoyable.” Alternatively, “and we enjoy it every time.”
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Now I need to prepare my backpack with all the things I'll need there. Now, I need to p The verb “to pack” is more appropriate here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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