Feb. 7, 2024
Snow and Hail
It’s late winter now, near the Chinese new year. Wind blows heavily and so as the hail.
I was expecting snow yesterday evening after listened to the broadcast of weather.
This difference inspires me to know the reason why sometimes it becomes snow and others become hail.
As snow, it grows up in clouds, when steams meet cold clouds, they condense into ice particles, and ice combines ice to condense hexagon snow.
The progress to generate hail is more complex. Hail is generally connected to convective clouds, when the small ices generate, they don’t drop off straightly, on the contrary, they rise up with the help of convective clouds and then drop down. This rise and drop process would circulate several times until they grow big enough to drop on the ground.
When knowing this circumstance, it seems like hail is more unusual, but I still love snow more. Because it is more beautiful and plastic, I can make snowman and have a snowball fight with my friends. But with hail, I only fill cold!
Snow and Hail
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Hail is generally connected to convective clouds, when the small ice is generated, they don’t drop off straighdirectly, on the contrary, they rise up with the help of convective clouds and then drop down.
This rise and drop process would circulate several times until they grow big enough to drop on the ground.
WhenAlthough knowing this circumstance, it seems li makes hail iseem more unusual, but I still love snow more.
Because it is more beautiful and plastic, I can make a snowman and have a snowball fight with my friends.
But with hail, I only fill cold!
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This was well written. Watch out for uncountable nouns (e.g., ice, steam) that cannot be pluralized with an -s.
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When knowing this circumstance, it seems like hail is more unusual, but I still love snow more.
Because it is more beautiful and plasticiable, I can make snowmaen and have a snowball fight with my friends.
But with hail, I only fileel cold!
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Great job!
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It’s late winter now, near the Chinese new year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Wind blows heavily and so as the hail.
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I was expecting snow yesterday evening after listened to the broadcast of weather. I was expecting snow yesterday evening after listen However, I was expecting snow yesterday evening after listen |
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This difference inspires me to know the reason why sometimes it becomes snow and others become hail. This difference inspires me to know the reason why it sometimes This difference inspires me to |
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As snow, it grows up in clouds, when steams meet cold clouds, they condense into ice particles, and ice combines ice to condense hexagon snow. As snow, it I wasn't sure if you if you want to use 'warm air' here or 'When steam'.
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The progress to generate hail is more complex. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Hail is generally connected to convective clouds, when the small ices generate, they don’t drop off straightly, on the contrary, they rise up with the help of convective clouds and then drop down. Hail is generally Hail is generally connected to convective clouds, when |
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This rise and drop process would circulate several times until they grow big enough to drop on the ground. This ris This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When knowing this circumstance, it seems like hail is more unusual, but I still love snow more. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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