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sachisachi

March 10, 2024

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Snow (61)

We haven't gotten any snow yet in my town in this winter.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in this winter.

We usually get snow around once a year, but it's rare not to get any snow even once.

If it snows it'll melt quickly in the sun, but it'll remain in the shade for two or three days.

I don't like driving snowy icy road.

I don't have special tires on my car.

I want to write some more about it, but my time is running out. I'll write tomorrow again.


私の町ではこの冬まだ全然雪が降っていません。

もうすぐ春です。だから、もう今年は雪が降らないかも。

たいてい一年に一回くらい雪が降りますが、一度も雪が降らないのは珍しいです。

もし雪が降っても、日向ではすぐ溶けてしまいますが、日陰では二日か三日ぐらい残ります。

私は、凍った雪道の運転が好きじゃありません。

特別なタイヤを持ってないです。

もっと書きたいけど時間がない。また明日書きます。

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Snow (61)

We haven't gotten any snow yet in my town in this winter.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in this winter.

We usually get snow arboundt once a year, but it's rare to not to get any snow even once.

If it snows, it'll melt quickly in the sun, but it'll remainf it's in the shade, it'll remain for two or three days.

You could also use the verb "last" instead of the verb "remain": "if it's in the shade, it'll last for two or three days."

I don't like driving on snowy, icy roads.

I don't have special tires on my car.

I want to write some more about it, but my time is running outI don't have enough time right now.

I'll write again tomorrow again.

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Great writing. ☃️

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sachisachi

March 21, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!

Snow

We haven't gotten any snow yet in my town in this winter.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in this winter.

WeIt usually get snows around once a year, but it's rare not to get any snow even once.

If it snows it'll melt quickly in the sun, but it'll remainf it is in the shade, it would last for two or three days.

I don't like driving snowy icy road.

I don't have any special tires on my car.

I want to write some more about it, but my time is running out.

I'll write tomorrow again.

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sachisachi

March 11, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in /this winter.

We usually get snow around once a year, but it's rare not to get anyhave it snow even once.

I don't like driving snowyon icy roads.

I wantould like to write some more about it, but my time is running outI don't have enough time right now.

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We don't get snow where I live at all, so it's probably nice to get some (if it's only once a year). Lol

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sachisachi

March 11, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!

Snow

We haven't gotten any snow yet in my town in this winter.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in this winter.

We usually get snow around once a year, but it's rare not to get any snow even once.

If it snows it'llThe snow melts quickly in the sun, but it'll remain in the shade forthe shade, it'll stay for longer, about two or three days.

yours was correct but this is a bit more natural

I don't like driving on snowy icy roads.

I don't have special tires on my car.

I want to write some more about it, but my time is running out.

I'll write again tomorrow again.

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sachisachi

March 10, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!

Snow

We haven't gotten any snow yet in my town in this winter.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in this winter.

雪がないことを強調するのに、「so we might not get any snow at all this winter.」と書けます。

We usually get snow around once a year, but it's rare not to get any snow even once.

If it snows, it'll melt quickly in the sun, but it'll remainf it's in the shade, it'll remain for two or three days.

文章が正しいけれど、少し不明です。

I don't have special tires on my car.

I want to write some more about it, but my time is running out.

I'll write tomorrow again.

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sachisachi

March 10, 2024

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Thank you so mych for your correction!

We haven't gotten any snow yet in my town in this winter.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here inat all this winteyear.

I don't like driving on snowy, icy roads.

I'll write again tomorrow again.

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sachisachi

March 10, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction!

Snow

We haven't gotten any snow yet in my town in this winter.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow (here) in this winter.

We usually get snow around once a year, but it's rare not to get any snow even once.

If it snows it'll melt quickly in the sun, but it'll remain in the shade for two or three days.

I don't like driving on snowy icy roads.

I don't have special tires on my car.

I want to write some more about it, but my time is running outI don't have much time.

I'll write tomorrow again.

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sachisachi

March 10, 2024

1

Thank you so much as always!

I'll write tomorrow again.


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Snow (61)


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We haven't gotten any snow yet in my town in this winter.


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We haven't gotten any snow yet in my town in this winter.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in this winter.


Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here inat all this winteyear.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow (here) in this winter.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in this winter.

雪がないことを強調するのに、「so we might not get any snow at all this winter.」と書けます。

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in this winter.

Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in /this winter.

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Spring is around the corner, so we might not get any snow here in this winter.

We usually get snow around once a year, but it's rare not to get any snow even once.


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We usually get snow around once a year, but it's rare not to get any snow even once.

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We usually get snow around once a year, but it's rare not to get anyhave it snow even once.

WeIt usually get snows around once a year, but it's rare not to get any snow even once.

We usually get snow arboundt once a year, but it's rare to not to get any snow even once.

If it snows it'll melt quickly in the sun, but it'll remain in the shade for two or three days.


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If it snows, it'll melt quickly in the sun, but it'll remainf it's in the shade, it'll remain for two or three days.

文章が正しいけれど、少し不明です。

If it snows it'llThe snow melts quickly in the sun, but it'll remain in the shade forthe shade, it'll stay for longer, about two or three days.

yours was correct but this is a bit more natural

If it snows it'll melt quickly in the sun, but it'll remainf it is in the shade, it would last for two or three days.

If it snows, it'll melt quickly in the sun, but it'll remainf it's in the shade, it'll remain for two or three days.

You could also use the verb "last" instead of the verb "remain": "if it's in the shade, it'll last for two or three days."

I don't like driving snowy icy road.


I don't like driving on snowy icy roads.

I don't like driving on snowy, icy roads.

I don't like driving on snowy icy roads.

I don't like driving snowyon icy roads.

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I don't have special tires on my car.


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