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As social media develops, we can easily get the latest news, while it has become more difficult to search for older information on the Internet.
Also, I tend to come across more negative reactions than positive ones.
Classic websites managed by individuals are still the best in terms of rich content and reliable information, so I prefer them to social media.
I love Disney. When I read archived posts by longtime fans, I find myself imagining the old landscapes of Tokyo Disney Resort that I have never seen.
Besides websites written in Japanese, I sometimes visit sites about Disneyland and Walt Disney World managed by local fans.
However, regarding Disneyland Paris, Hong Kong, and Shanghai, I have not yet found any websites run by local fans.
It is quite difficult for Japanese people to travel to Paris, so there is limited information about it in Japanese.
However, many Japanese fans enthusiastically visit Hong Kong and Shanghai and post a lot of blogs about them. As a result, local fan-made websites are harder to find.
Japanese fans tend to focus on character meet-and-greets in their posts.
I would love to learn more about the background stories of the parks and the perspectives of local visitors.
If you know any recommended websites, I would really appreciate it if you could share them.
SNSの発達により速報を入手しやすくなった一方で、過去の情報を検索するのは難しくなったように感じます。また、ポジティブな反応よりもネガティブな反応の方が目につきやすくなりました。
内容の濃さや情報の信頼性という点では、昔ながらの個人サイトに勝るものはないでしょう。
ディズニーファンの私は、古参ファンによるサイトの過去ログを漁りながら、「自分が見たことのない」舞浜の景色に思いを馳せています。
日本語のサイトだけでなく、現地ファンが運営するオーランドやアナハイムの情報サイトも時折訪れています。
しかし、パリ・香港・上海に関しては、現地ファンが運営するサイトにまだ出会えていません。
渡航ハードルが高いパリはともかく、香港や上海については日本人によるレポートばかりがヒットしてしまいます。そうしたブログはキャラクターグリーティング中心の内容が多いです。
私は現地パークのバックグラウンドストーリーや、現地の人のリアルな反応を知りたいのに!
どこかおすすめのサイトをご存じでしたら、ぜひ教えてください。
As social media develops, we can easily get the latest news, while it has becomebut it is more difficult to search forfind older information on the Interlinet.
As social media develops, we easily get the latest news, but it is more difficult to find older information online.
This is a more succinct way of saying the same thing. There is nothing wrong with your original sentence, this is just an alternative.
When I read archived posts by longtime fans, I find myself imagining the old landscapes of the Tokyo Disney Resort that, even though I have never seen them myself.
When I read archived posts by longtime fans, I find myself imagining the old landscapes of the Tokyo Disney Resort, even though I have never seen them myself.
This is a little more natural, but your original sentence is still good.
Besides websites written in Japanese, I sometimes visit sites about Disneyland and Walt Disney World managed by local fans. Besides websites written in Japanese, I sometimes visit sites about Disneyland and Walt Disney World managed by local fans.
However, regarding Disneyland Paris, Hong Kong, and Shanghai, I have not yet found any websites run by local fans. However, regarding Disneyland Paris, Hong Kong, and Shanghai, I have not yet found any websites run by local fans.
It is quite difficult for Japanese people to travel to Paris, so there is limited information about it in Japanese. It is quite difficult for Japanese people to travel to Paris, so there is limited information about it in Japanese.
However, many Japanese fans enthusiastically visit Hong Kong and Shanghai and post a lot ofmany blogs about them.
However, many Japanese fans enthusiastically visit Hong Kong and Shanghai and post many blogs about them.
many vs. a lot of, has a better flow even though they convey very similar meanings
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Sometimes different internet search engines only show results filtered by the IP address you are using, so for example only showing mostly Japanese results if you are doing a web search from Japan. I often use Qwant as a search engine and it seems to search with less bias for which country you are in. Here is a French fan-based I found for you for Disney Paris: https://fan-disneyland-paris.e-monsite.com/blog/ Also sometimes translating your search to the language of the country you are searching for also yields more results. Hope that helps you find some more gems.
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By "classic", do you mean older websites?
This feels like what I would call an "indie website", or "independent website". "Indie" is a shortening of "independent" (that is, not dependent on large companies), though it's mainly used in the context of art and, to some extent, technology.
As social media develops, we can easily get the latest news, whilethough it has also become more difficult to search for older information on the Internet.
As social media develops, we can easily get the latest news, though it has also become more difficult to search for older information on the Internet.
Feels a little more natural to me.
Also, I tend to come across more negative reactions than positive ones. Also, I tend to come across more negative reactions than positive ones.
A "reaction" is something someone feels *because* of something. It is unclear to me what that thing is in this sentence. I might say: "...more negative reactions to the news than positive ones." (if that is what you mean).
Alternatively: "...I tend to come across more negativity than positivity."
Classic websites managed by individuals are still the best in terms of rich content and reliable information, so I prefer them to social media.
I love Disney.
When I read archived posts by longtime fans, I find myself imagining the old landscapes of Tokyo Disney Resort that I have never seen. When I read archived posts by longtime fans, I find myself imagining the old landscapes of Tokyo Disney Resort that I have never seen.
If by "that I have never seen", you mean you've never visited them, I'd say "that I have never gotten to see in person." Though, more naturally, I'd say: "...I find myself imagining the old landscapes of Tokyo Disney Resort which I never got to see in person." (If those old landscapes are now gone forever).
Besides websites written in Japanese, I sometimes visit sites about Disneyland and Walt Disney World managed by local fans.
However, regarding Disneyland Paris, Hong Kong, and Shanghai, I have not yet found any websites run by local fans.
It is quite difficult for Japanese people to travel to Paris, so there is limited information about it in Japanese.
However, many Japanese fans enthusiastically visit Hong Kong and Shanghai and post a lot of blogs about them.
As a result, local fan-made websites are harder to find.
Japanese fans tend to focus on character meet-and-greets in their posts.
I would love to learn more about the background stories of the parks and the perspectives of local visitors.
If you know any recommended websites, I would really appreciate it if you could share them.
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Well written, overall!
I don't know any websites about Disneyland, unfortunately. I've been to the original park in Anaheim a few times as a kid, though the last time I went was a very long time ago.
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As social media develops, we can easily get the latest news, whilebut it has become more difficult to search for older information on the Internet.
As social media develops, we can easily get the latest news, but it has become more difficult to search for older information on the Internet.
Also, I tend to come across more negative reactions than positive ones.
Classic websites managed by individuals are still the best in terms of rich content and reliable information, so I prefer them to social media.
I love Disney.
When I read archived posts by longtime fans, I find myself imagining the old landscapes of Tokyo Disney Resort that I have never seen.
Besides websites written in Japanese, I sometimes visit sites about Disneyland and Walt Disney World managed by local fans.
However, regarding Disneyland Paris, Hong Kong, and Shanghai, I have not yet found any websites run by local fans for Disneyland Paris, Hong Kong, or Shanghai yet.
However, I have not found any websites run by local fans for Disneyland Paris, Hong Kong, or Shanghai yet.
sounds a bit smoother this way
It is quite difficult for Japanese people to travel to Paris, so there is limited information about it in Japanese.
However, many Japanese fans enthusiastically visit Hong Kong and Shanghai and post a lot of blogs about them.
As a result, local fan-made websites are harder to find.
Japanese fans tend to focus on character meet-and-greets in their posts.
I would love to learn more about the background stories of the parks and the perspectives of local visitors.
If you know any recommended websites, I would really appreciate it if you could share them.
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Even though I spend a lot of time online, it's mostly on the popular websites (youtube, reddit). I don't think I even know any classic websites 😅
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As social media develops, we can easily get the latest news, while it has become more difficult to search for older information on the Internet.
As social media develops, we can easily get the latest news,
As social media develops, we This is a more succinct way of saying the same thing. There is nothing wrong with your original sentence, this is just an alternative.
As social media develops, we can easily get the latest news, Feels a little more natural to me. |
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Also, I tend to come across more negative reactions than positive ones. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Also, I tend to come across more negative reactions than positive ones. Also, I tend to come across more negative reactions than positive ones. A "reaction" is something someone feels *because* of something. It is unclear to me what that thing is in this sentence. I might say: "...more negative reactions to the news than positive ones." (if that is what you mean). Alternatively: "...I tend to come across more negativity than positivity." |
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I love Disney. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I read archived posts by longtime fans, I find myself imagining the old landscapes of Tokyo Disney Resort that I have never seen. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
When I read archived posts by longtime fans, I find myself imagining the old landscapes of the Tokyo Disney Resort This is a little more natural, but your original sentence is still good. When I read archived posts by longtime fans, I find myself imagining the old landscapes of Tokyo Disney Resort that I have never seen. When I read archived posts by longtime fans, I find myself imagining the old landscapes of Tokyo Disney Resort that I have never seen. If by "that I have never seen", you mean you've never visited them, I'd say "that I have never gotten to see in person." Though, more naturally, I'd say: "...I find myself imagining the old landscapes of Tokyo Disney Resort which I never got to see in person." (If those old landscapes are now gone forever). |
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Besides websites written in Japanese, I sometimes visit sites about Disneyland and Walt Disney World managed by local fans. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Besides websites written in Japanese, I sometimes visit sites about Disneyland and Walt Disney World managed by local fans. Besides websites written in Japanese, I sometimes visit sites about Disneyland and Walt Disney World managed by local fans. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, regarding Disneyland Paris, Hong Kong, and Shanghai, I have not yet found any websites run by local fans.
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It is quite difficult for Japanese people to travel to Paris, so there is limited information about it in Japanese. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It is quite difficult for Japanese people to travel to Paris, so there is limited information about it in Japanese. It is quite difficult for Japanese people to travel to Paris, so there is limited information about it in Japanese. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, many Japanese fans enthusiastically visit Hong Kong and Shanghai and post a lot of blogs about them. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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