July 26, 2020
Are you bored? Maybe you are still in lockdown with nothing to do. If so, then I have the perfect pastime for you to try during this quarantine. It’s quite simple, the only thing to do is to grab a pen and paper and start writing. This trend is not new, indeed it has been around for ages, but nowadays it has become an oddity due to social media. However, there are still some romantic souls keeping this pastime alive, these are people who enjoy the pleasure of handwriting and who appreciate receiving a letter by post.
There are different categories of snail mail, some people are lured by the idea of collecting stamps, postcards, coins, and all kinds of souvenirs from around the world.
Others lead by their creative side, are enticed by the DIY aspect of snail mail, which by the way, entails making envelopes, preparing the paper, and why not, making small gifts for the other person. These sorts of people seize the opportunity to send a letter as an instance to pour out all of their artistry.
Lastly, are those who simply enjoy the process of expressing themselves through writing, and therefore, they cherish having someone with whom correspond by letters.
Regardless of the motivation, for me, sending and receiving a letter is one of the most simple and at the same time priceless acts of love. Just think about all the time and energy that it takes. First to find the materials, then to organize one’s thoughts in a piece of paper (in fact, writing just a page can take hours!) Then, to take the letter to the post office, and finally, to wait for weeks or even months for a reply.
For all the mentioned and more, snail mail is an art, but a type of art that needs to be performed in pairs. In this sense, having a good partner is critical to maintaining the exchange and the interest alive. For those who have someone waiting on the other side, then half of the work is done. However, for those who don’t have anyone to write to, there are some options, such as websites devoted to snail mail where people set up a profile in the hopes of finding the right fit.
SNAIL MAIL
Are you bored?
Maybe you are still in lockdown with nothing to do.
If so, then I have the perfect pastime for you to try during this quarantine.
It’s quite simple,: the only thing you have to do is to grab a pen and paper and start writing.
This trend is not new,; indeed, it has been around for ages, but nowadays it has become an oddity due to social media.
However, there are still some romantic souls keeping this pastime alive, t. These are people who enjoy the pleasure of handwriting and who appreciate receiving a letter by post.
There are different categories of snail mail, s. Some people are lured by the idea of collecting stamps, postcards, coins, and all kinds of souvenirs from around the world.
Others lead by their creative side, and are enticed by the DIY aspect of snail mail, which by the way, entails making envelopes, preparing the paper, and why no, if you want, making small gifts for the other person.
These sorts of people seize the opportunity to send a letter as an instchance to pour out all of their artistry.
Lastly, there are those who simply enjoy the process of expressing themselves through writing, and who therefore, they cherish having someone with whom to correspond by lettersmail.
First to find the materials, then to organize one’s thoughts ion a piece of paper (in fact, writing just a page can take hours!) Then, to take the letter to the post office, and finally, to wait for weeks or even months for a reply.
For all the aforementioned and moreothers, snail mail is an art, but a type of art that needs to be performed in pairs.
In this sense, having a good partner is critical to maintaining the exchange and keeping the interest alive.
For those who have someone waiting on the other side, then half of the work is done.
However, for those who don’t have anyone to write to, there are some other options, such as websites devoted to snail mail, where people set up a profile in the hopes of finding the right fit.
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Good topic, and written with some good vocab! My main piece of advice would be to break up sentences more, there were a few run-ons at the beginning :)
SNAIL MAIL
Are you bored?
Maybe you are still in lockdown with nothing to do.
If so, then I have the perfect pastime for you to try during this quarantine.
Someone else suggested "your quarantine," but I think this sounds better without any modifier.
It’s quite simple, t: The only thing to do is to grab a pen and paper and start writing.
This needs a colon, as these are two complete sentences in which the second sentence is the explanation for the first. The rules for colons are not that complicated, but as what follows the colon is a complete sentence, it needs to be capitalized.
This trend is not new,; indeed fact it has been around for ages, but nowadays it has become an oddity due to social media.
And here we need a semicolon. Semicolons are different from colons because colons show an explanation (Statement: Explanation) and semicolons show related thoughts (Statement; related statement). In general, if you can replace a semicolon with a period and have the sentences still make sense, you're using them right. :)
I also don't think indeed is quite the right word here. Indeed implies an outside agreement that isn't quite present here.
However, there are still some romantic souls keeping this pastime alive, t: These are people who enjoy the pleasure of handwriting and who appreciate receiving a letter by post.
Colon usage to link these is better. Statement (who does this?): Explanation (these people do this).
There are different categories of snail mail, s. Some people are lured by the idea of collecting stamps, postcards, coins, and all kinds of souvenirs from around the world.
This is better as two sentences, because your following sentences are also part of the same "list".
Others lead by their creative side, and are enticed by the DIY aspect of snail mail, which by the way, entails making envelopes, preparing the paper, and why not, making small gifts for the other person.
These sorts of people seize the opportunity to send a letter as an instanceopportunity to pour out all of their artistry.
Instance is used for temporal things, where this is an action, so opportunity is better/more common.
Lastly, there are those who simply enjoy the process of expressing themselves through writing, and therefore, they cherish having someone with whom to correspond byvia letters.
"Lastly, there are those" or "Lastly are those." Both are used, the former is more common, the latter more flowery, but if you choose the latter, you cannot use a comma.
"By" isn't quite right here. "Via" is more common.
"Correspond" needs an assisting word to make sense. It can't stand on its own. If you want this to sound more casual, you could say "they cherish having someone to correspond with via letters."
Regardless of the motivation, for me, sending and receiving a letter is one of the most simple and at the same time priceless acts of love.
Just think about all the time and energy that it takes.!
First tone must find the materials, then to organize one’s thoughts in a piece of paper (i. In fact, writing just a page can take hours!) Then, tone must take the letter to the post office, and finally, to wait for weeks or even months for a reply.
A few things. These aren't sentences, as they don't have an actor. I've added "one" to continue in the same manner as your usage, and changed the verb tenses to reflect that.
Secondly, this is a little specific, but you have two thoughts here: one outside the parentheses, and one inside. The one outside MUST have final punctuation, while the one inside probably should but isn't entirely necessary. You can keep the parenthetical clause, but it cannot replace the punctuation necessary for the statement outside.
There are a few ways to do this, and I chose above the most simple: take the parenthetical clause and move it into its own sentence. Another way would be:
"...in a piece of paper (in fact, writing just a page can take hours!)." The period outside of the parenthesis finalizes the sentence the parenthetical clause is a part of. Please don't be frustrated, as this is something many native English speakers have difficulty with.
In this sense, having a good partner is critical to maintaining the exchange and keeping the interest alive.
"Maintaining interest" is a bit strange, there is a standard expression of "keeping interest alive" that suits better in full.
For those who have someone waiting on the other side, then half of the work is done.
However, for those who don’t have anyone to write to, there are some options, such as websites devoted to snail mail where people set up a profile in the hopes of finding the right fit.
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Are you bored?
Maybe you are still in lockdown with nothing to do.
If so, then I have the perfect pastime for you to try during thisyour quarantine.
I changed “this” to “your” because that feels more natural to me.
It’s quite simple,; the only thing you have to do is to grab a pen and paper and start writing.
This trendhobby is not new, indeed; it has been around for ages, but nowadays it has become an oddity due to social media.
A trend is something that is popular. Since letter writing isn’t really popular, it isn’t quite right to refer to it as a trend.
However, there are still some romantic souls keeping this pastime alive, t. These are people who enjoy the pleasure of handwriting and who appreciate receiving a letter by post.
There are different categories ofhobbies associated with snail mail, s. Some people are lured by the idea of collecting stamps, postcards, coins, and all kinds of souvenirs from around the world.
Others lead by their creative side, are enticed by the DIY aspect of snail mail,; which by the way,can entails making envelopes, preparing the paper, and why not,even making small gifts for the other person.
These sorts of people seize the opportunity to send a letter as an instanceopportunity to pour out all of their artistry.
Lastly, there are those who simply enjoy the process of expressing themselves through writing, and therefore, they cherish having someone with whom they can correspond bythrough letters.
Regardless of the motivation, for me, sending and receiving a letter is ons are some of the most simple and at the same time priceless acts of love.
Just think about all the time and energy that it takes.:
Ffirst to find theing materials, then to organizeing one’s thoughts ion a piece of paper (in fact, writing just a page can take hours!) Then, to, then takeing the letter to the post office, and finally, to waiting for weeks or even months for a reply.
For all the mentioned and more, snail mail is an art, but in particular a type of art that needs to be performed in pairs.
In this sense, having a good partner is critical to maintaining the exchange and keeping the interest alive.
For those who have someone waiting on the other side, then half of the work is done.
However, for those who don’t have anyone to write to, there are some options, such as websites devoted to snail mail where people set up a profile in the hopes of finding the right fit.
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First to find the materials, then to organize one’s thoughts in a piece of paper (in fact, writing just a page can take hours!) Then, to take the letter to the post office, and finally, to wait for weeks or even months for a reply.
First A few things. These aren't sentences, as they don't have an actor. I've added "one" to continue in the same manner as your usage, and changed the verb tenses to reflect that. Secondly, this is a little specific, but you have two thoughts here: one outside the parentheses, and one inside. The one outside MUST have final punctuation, while the one inside probably should but isn't entirely necessary. You can keep the parenthetical clause, but it cannot replace the punctuation necessary for the statement outside. There are a few ways to do this, and I chose above the most simple: take the parenthetical clause and move it into its own sentence. Another way would be: "...in a piece of paper (in fact, writing just a page can take hours!)." The period outside of the parenthesis finalizes the sentence the parenthetical clause is a part of. Please don't be frustrated, as this is something many native English speakers have difficulty with. First to find the materials, then to organize one’s thoughts |
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For all the mentioned and more, snail mail is an art, but a type of art that needs to be performed in pairs. For all the mentioned and more, snail mail is an art, but in particular a type of art that needs to be performed in pairs. For all the aforementioned and |
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In this sense, having a good partner is critical to maintaining the exchange and the interest alive. In this sense, having a good partner is critical to maintaining the exchange and keeping the interest alive. In this sense, having a good partner is critical to maintaining the exchange and keeping the interest alive. "Maintaining interest" is a bit strange, there is a standard expression of "keeping interest alive" that suits better in full. In this sense, having a good partner is critical to maintaining the exchange and keeping the interest alive. |
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