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tongxing

Dec. 10, 2022

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snack

December 10, 2022
I am keen on filling up on snake food. They are so delicious. When I'm hungry, I will find something to eat. But today I found nothing in my home. So I decided to buy some snake food. I went to the supermarket. I bought some drumsticks,latiao,sweet and cookies. I'm a die-hard latiao fan. latiao is most popular snack for under 25 in China. If you have the opportunity to come to China, you must also try it. Tips : Don't eat too much
中文:我非常喜欢用零食来填饱肚子,他们真的太没味了,当我饿的时候我会去找一些东西来吃,但是今天我发现我的家里什么都没有了,所以我决定去买一些零食,我去了超市我买了一些鸡腿,辣条糖果,饼干。我是辣条的死忠粉,辣条是中国25岁以下最受欢迎的小吃,如果你有机会来到中国,你也一定要试一下,温馨提示不要吃太多

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When I'm hungry, I will findlook for something to eat.

look for = 找
find = 找到

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I agree with Daisy's corrections.

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tongxing

Dec. 17, 2022

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Thank you very much!

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tongxing

Dec. 17, 2022

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I have a question for you. How can I express“上火了” in English?

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JoeTofu

Dec. 17, 2022

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If you’re referring to the Chinese medical concept (to suffer such symptoms as constipation, conjunctivitis, and inflammation of the nasal and oral cavities), we don’t have a term for this in English. Instead, we would have to describe the symptoms.

If you mean something like “这事真让人上火” you could use “annoyed.” It really depends on the context.

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tongxing

Dec. 20, 2022

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Thank you!

sSnacks

I am keen onlike filling up on snacke foods.

!!!snake = 蛇
snake and snack have different pronunciations

But today I found nothing in my home, so I decided to buy some snacks.

So I decided to buy some snake food.

Sentences should not be separated too much

I went to the supermarket. and bought some drumsticks, latiao, sweets, and cookies.

I bought some drumsticks,latiao,sweet and cookies.

Sentences should not be separated too much

lLatiao is the most popular snack for under 25s in China.

Tips : Don't eat too much!

No space needed before ":"

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I've never eaten latiao before but it looks delicious!

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tongxing

Dec. 11, 2022

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Thank you!

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tongxing

Dec. 17, 2022

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Yes, It is very delicious. If you ever come to China, I'll treat you to latiao.

sSnack Food

or

Snacks

or

Snacks are Delicious

or

Delicious Snacks

December 10, 2022

I am keen on filling up on snacke food.

They are so delicious.

When I'm hungry, I will find something to eat.

But todayToday, unfortunately, I found nothing in my home.

So I decided to buy some snacke food.

I went to the supermarket.

I bought (some) drumsticks, latiao, sweets and cookies.

I'm a die-hard latiao fan.

lLatiao is the most popular snack for those under 25 in China.

If you have the opportunity to come to China, you must also try it.

Tips : Don't eat too much.

If there were more than one tip, then it would be "tips."

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I hadn't heard of it before so thank you for the recommendation! Great work!

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tongxing

Dec. 11, 2022

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Thank you!

snack


sSnack Food

or Snacks or Snacks are Delicious or Delicious Snacks

sSnacks

December 10, 2022


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am keen on filling up on snake food.


I am keen on filling up on snacke food.

I am keen onlike filling up on snacke foods.

!!!snake = 蛇 snake and snack have different pronunciations

They are so delicious.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I'm hungry, I will find something to eat.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I'm hungry, I will findlook for something to eat.

look for = 找 find = 找到

But today I found nothing in my home.


But todayToday, unfortunately, I found nothing in my home.

But today I found nothing in my home, so I decided to buy some snacks.

So I decided to buy some snake food.


So I decided to buy some snacke food.

So I decided to buy some snake food.

Sentences should not be separated too much

I went to the supermarket.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I went to the supermarket. and bought some drumsticks, latiao, sweets, and cookies.

I bought some drumsticks,latiao,sweet and cookies.


I bought (some) drumsticks, latiao, sweets and cookies.

I bought some drumsticks,latiao,sweet and cookies.

Sentences should not be separated too much

I'm a die-hard latiao fan.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

latiao is most popular snack for under 25 in China.


lLatiao is the most popular snack for those under 25 in China.

lLatiao is the most popular snack for under 25s in China.

If you have the opportunity to come to China, you must also try it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Tips : Don't eat too much


Tips : Don't eat too much.

If there were more than one tip, then it would be "tips."

Tips : Don't eat too much!

No space needed before ":"

中文:我非常喜欢用零食来填饱肚子,他们真的太没味了,当我饿的时候我会去找一些东西来吃,但是今天我发现我的家里什么都没有了,所以我决定去买一些零食,我去了超市我买了一些鸡腿,辣条糖果,饼干。我是辣条的死忠粉,辣条是中国25岁以下最受欢迎的小吃,如果你有机会来到中国,你也一定要试一下,温馨提示不要吃太多


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