Feb. 18, 2021
Operation Saucer
In 1977 in a small town in northern the Brazil people say they see stranger lights in the sky. The lights attacked the residents with a laser ray on their necks. They're afraid some people left the city while the cases increase.
The UFOs appeared day and night attacking more victims. The Brazil's Government ask the military for help to solve the case starting the "Operation Saucer" (In portuguese "Operação Prato").
The Operation Saucer finished months later and the UFOs cases reduced, but this story about aliens in this small town is still present today. The culture of this town was influenced by the cases in 1977. Today you can find statues of aliens all over the place but the story of that place remains a mystery.
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Operation Saucer
In 1977 in a small town in northern the Brazil people say they see stranger lights in the sky.
In 1977 in a small town in northern Brazil people say they see strange lights in the sky.
The lights attacked the residents with a laser ray on their necks. The lights attacked the residents with a laser ray on their necks.
The lights attacked the residents with a laser ray on their necks. - This is correct...but...it sounds a little weird.
The lights attacked the residents with a laser ray.
They're afraid somethat people leftwill leave the city while the cases increase.
They're afraid that people will leave the city while the cases increase.
The UFOs appeared day and night attacking more victims.
The UFOs appear day and night attacking more victims.
The Brazil's Government asked the military for help toin solveing the case, starting the "Operation Saucer" (In portuguese "Operação Prato").
Brazil's Government asked the military for help in solving the case, starting "Operation Saucer" (In portuguese "Operação Prato").
The Operation Saucer finished months later and the UFOs cases reduced, but this story about aliens in this small town is still present today.
Operation Saucer finished months later and the UFO cases reduced, but this story about aliens in this small town is still present today.
The culture of this town was influenced by the cases in 1977.
Today you can find statues of aliens all over the place but the story of that place remains a mystery.
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Very good. "The" is tricky, even I don't understand when we do and don't use it sometimes XD
Just lots of reading and writing will help! :)
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In 1977 in a small town in northern the Brazil people say they see stranger lights in the sky.
In 1977 in a small town in northern |
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The lights attacked the residents with a laser ray on their necks. The lights attacked the residents with a laser ray on their necks. The lights attacked the residents with a laser ray on their necks. The lights attacked the residents with a laser ray on their necks. - This is correct...but...it sounds a little weird. The lights attacked the residents with a laser ray. |
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They're afraid some people left the city while the cases increase.
They're afraid |
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The UFOs appeared day and night attacking more victims.
The UFOs appear |
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The Brazil's Government ask the military for help to solve the case starting the "Operation Saucer" (In portuguese "Operação Prato").
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The Operation Saucer finished months later and the UFOs cases reduced, but this story about aliens in this small town is still present today.
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The culture of this town was influenced by the cases in 1977. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today you can find statues of aliens all over the place but the story of that place remains a mystery. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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