Jan. 10, 2021
Translation Practice
Today, I want to talk about my hometown. My hometown is a small village which is located in the southeast part of England, and it is 60 kilometers from London, so most people in the village work in London. The village is quiet, and there are many children in the village. Maybe for the young, the village is a little boring because it doesn’t have shops and bars. I think a special thing for my village is that it has a long history. For example, there is a church built in the eleventh century in the village. When I was a child, I liked exploring around the village by bike, and played with kids from other villages. Children living in the village are able to experience freedom and relaxation.
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Today, I want to talk about my hometown.
My hometown is a small village which is located in the southeast part of England, and it is 60 kilometers from London, so most people in the village work in London.
My hometown is a small village located in the southeast part of England, and it is 60 kilometers from London, so most people in the village work in London.
What you wrote was correct–this is just more concise.
The village is quiet, and there are many children in the villagthere.
The village is quiet, and there are many children there.
Also a stylistic edit.
Maybe for the young, the village is a little boring because it doesn’t have shops and bars.
I think a special thing for my village is that it has a long history.
For example, there is a church built in the eleventh century in the village.
For example, there is a church built in the eleventh century.
When I was a child, I liked exploring around the village by bike, and playeding with kids from other villages.
When I was a child, I liked exploring the village by bike and playing with kids from other villages.
"Explore" takes a direct object, but no preposition. You can explore a park, a city, an area, a house, a country, a topic, a question, etc.
Children living in the village are able to experience freedom and relaxation.
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Today, I want to talk about my hometown. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My hometown is a small village which is located in the southeast part of England, and it is 60 kilometers from London, so most people in the village work in London.
My hometown is a small village What you wrote was correct–this is just more concise. |
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The village is quiet, and there are many children in the village.
The village is quiet, and there are many children Also a stylistic edit. |
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Maybe for the young, the village is a little boring because it doesn’t have shops and bars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think a special thing for my village is that it has a long history. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example, there is a church built in the eleventh century in the village.
For example, there is a church built in the eleventh century |
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When I was a child, I liked exploring around the village by bike, and played with kids from other villages.
When I was a child, I liked exploring "Explore" takes a direct object, but no preposition. You can explore a park, a city, an area, a house, a country, a topic, a question, etc. |
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Children living in the village are able to experience freedom and relaxation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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