Feb. 11, 2021
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Shingo Nakamura is back with a new single called “Glow.”
The Japanese progressive house master announced the release of “Glow” on his Instagram today with the caption, “My new track ‘Glow’ is out now on Monstercat Silk! After a long break, I’m so excited to be back with this song. I hope you enjoy it!”
“Glow” is an emotive and mysterious progressive house track filled with the DJ's iconic sounds. And it is the precursor to his forthcoming album with the same title due out in June.
Monster Silk was recently founded as the Vancouver-based label Monstercat acquired the LA-based imprint, Silk.
‘Glow’ is the first song that has been released on Monster Silk, celebrating the birth of the new label.
Shingo Nakamura is back with a new single called “Glow.”
The Japanese progressive house master announced the release of “Glow” on his Instagram today with the caption, “My new track ‘Glow’ is out now on Monstercat Silk!
The grammar is correct, but what is a progressive house master? Maybe it is something other people already know about.
After a long break, I’m so excited to be back with this song.
I hope you enjoy it!”
“Glow” is an emotive and mysterious progressive house track filled with the DJ's iconic sounds.
And it is the precursor to his forthcoming album with the same title due out in June.
Monster Silk was recently founded asbecause the Vancouver-based label Monstercat acquired the LA-based imprint, Silk.
This is correct, but I misread the "as", thinking it did not mean "because" or "since". That is why I suggested a more direct word here. You could also say "when" in this particular case.
‘Glow’ is the first song that has been released on Monster Silk, celebrating the birth of the new label.
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Very impressive! I just made some stylistic notes for clarity.
Feb. 11, 2021
Thank you very much! I really appreciate it :)
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Shingo Nakamura is back with a new single called “Glow.” This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Japanese progressive house master announced the release of “Glow” on his Instagram today with the caption, “My new track ‘Glow’ is out now on Monstercat Silk! The Japanese progressive house master announced the release of “Glow” on his Instagram today with the caption, “My new track ‘Glow’ is out now on Monstercat Silk! The grammar is correct, but what is a progressive house master? Maybe it is something other people already know about. |
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After a long break, I’m so excited to be back with this song. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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“Glow” is an emotive and mysterious progressive house track filled with the DJ's iconic sounds. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And it is the precursor to his forthcoming album with the same title due out in June. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Monster Silk was recently founded as the Vancouver-based label Monstercat acquired the LA-based imprint, Silk. Monster Silk was recently founded This is correct, but I misread the "as", thinking it did not mean "because" or "since". That is why I suggested a more direct word here. You could also say "when" in this particular case. |
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‘Glow’ is the first song that has been released on Monster Silk, celebrating the birth of the new label. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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