Dec. 10, 2021
In the afternoon, the dormitory keeper told me that she had found a box of cigarettes from a girl student of mine. Then I questioned the girl about it, and I known several students including three girls involved in it. I reported it to the director and their parents. I was very disappointed with them.
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In the afternoon, the dormitory keeper told me that she had found a box of cigarettes from a girlfemale student of mine.
Generally, "boy" and "girl" should not be used as adjectives outside of situations where you want to indicate that something is intended for boys/girls (or men/women).
Then I questioned the girl about it, and I knownit turned out that there were several students, including three girls, involved in it.
If you want to say that you knew the students concerned, you could add "whom I knew" after "several students."
I reported it to the director and their parentsir parents and the director.
"Principal" or "headmaster/headmistress" may be better than "director."
Since the antecedent to "their" is "several students" or "three girls," it seems more appropriate to put it first.
I was very disappointed with them.
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In the afternoon, the dormitory keeper told me that she had found a box of cigarettes from a girl student of mine. In the afternoon, the dormitory keeper told me that she had found a box of cigarettes from a Generally, "boy" and "girl" should not be used as adjectives outside of situations where you want to indicate that something is intended for boys/girls (or men/women). |
Then I questioned the girl about it, and I known several students including three girls involved in it. Then I questioned the girl about it, and If you want to say that you knew the students concerned, you could add "whom I knew" after "several students." |
I reported it to the director and their parents. I reported it to the "Principal" or "headmaster/headmistress" may be better than "director." Since the antecedent to "their" is "several students" or "three girls," it seems more appropriate to put it first. |
I was very disappointed with them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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