Sept. 10, 2020
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I laugh out loud once a day. It's a daily goal. I feel like it doesn't matter if I'm having a hard time or not, having a good laugh from the bottom of my stomach makes me feel better. Have fun every day!
1日一回大爆笑する。毎日の目標だ。辛いことがあっても、お腹の底から大笑いすることで、どうでも良くなる気がする。楽しい毎日を！
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I laugh out loud once a day.
It's a daily goal.
I feel like it doesn't matter if I'm having a hard time or not,; having a good laugh from the bottom of my stomach makes me feel better.
This sentence needs a semicolon because both "I feel like it doesn't matter if I'm having a hard time or not." and "Having a good laugh from the bottom of my stomach makes me feel better." are both independent clauses that can stand alone. This means to connect them you need to use a semicolon (which my correction does) or they need to be joined with a comma and a conjunction (and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet).
Have fun every day!
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Sept. 11, 2020
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I feel like it doesn't matter if I'm having a hard time or not, having a good laugh from the bottom of my stomach makes me feel better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I feel like it doesn't matter if I'm having a hard time or not This sentence needs a semicolon because both "I feel like it doesn't matter if I'm having a hard time or not." and "Having a good laugh from the bottom of my stomach makes me feel better." are both independent clauses that can stand alone. This means to connect them you need to use a semicolon (which my correction does) or they need to be joined with a comma and a conjunction (and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet). |
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