June 24, 2023
Smartphones
In the digital era, smartphones are one of the most widely used technologies for people. It plays an important role in our lives. Smartphones bring about lots of advantages. First of all, it is considered to be the quickest means of communication in our daily life. With this gadget, we can easily contact our friends and our relative wherever just by calling or sending messages to each other. Furthermore, smartphones are also a means of entertainment for people. For example, we can listen to music and play games on it. Moreover, by using the latest apps on smartphones, we can access the Internet to watch films, check out profiles on social networks and update our status wherever we are and whenever we like. Last but not least, studying becomes more effective if a student has a personal smartphone. They can look up the dictionary or find out any sources of reference on the Internet which is useful for them. In addition, it could be said that smartphones are an indispensable part of our life.
In the digital era, smartphones are one of the most widely used technologies for people.
"For people" isn't needed and it sounds more natural without it
With this gadget, we can easily contact our friends and (our) relatives wherever they are just by calling or sending messages to each other.
"Wherever they are" just so it's clearer
Furthermore, smartphones are also a means of entertainment (for people.)
Last but not least, studying becomes more effective if a student has a personal smartphone / students can study more effectively with a personal smartphone.
They can look upuse the dictionary or find out any sources ofand references on the Internet which isthat are useful (for them).
In addition, it couldt can be said that smartphones are an indispensable part of our life.
"In addition" isn't used for the conclusion so when you use it like this, your post seems to end abruptly.
June 25, 2023
Thanks for your helps! :D
Smartphones
In the digital era, smartphones are one of the most widely used technologies for people.
ItThey plays an important role in our lives.
Smartphones bring about lots of advantages.
First of all, it is considered to be the quickest means of communication in our daily life.
With this gadget, we can easily contact our friends and our relatives wherever just by calling or sending messages to each other.
For example, we can listen to music and play games on ithem.
Moreover, by using the latest apps on smartphones, we can access the Internet to watch films, check out profiles on social networks and update our status wherever we are and whenever we like.
Last but not least, studying becomes more effective if a student has a personal smartphone.
They can look up the dictionary or find out any sources of reference on the Internet which is useful for them.
In addition, it could be said that smartphones are an indispensable part of our life.
June 25, 2023
Thanks for your corrections! :)
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In the digital era, smartphones are one of the most widely used technologies for people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In the digital era, smartphones are one of the most widely used technologies "For people" isn't needed and it sounds more natural without it |
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It plays an important role in our lives.
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Smartphones bring about lots of advantages. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First of all, it is considered to be the quickest means of communication in our daily life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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With this gadget, we can easily contact our friends and our relative wherever just by calling or sending messages to each other. With this gadget, we can easily contact our friends and our relatives wherever just by calling or sending messages to each other. With this gadget, we can easily contact our friends and (our) relatives wherever they are just by calling or sending messages to each other. "Wherever they are" just so it's clearer |
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Furthermore, smartphones are also a means of entertainment for people. Furthermore, smartphones are also a means of entertainment (for people.) |
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For example, we can listen to music and play games on it. For example, we can listen to music and play games on |
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Moreover, by using the latest apps on smartphones, we can access the Internet to watch films, check out profiles on social networks and update our status wherever we are and whenever we like. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Last but not least, studying becomes more effective if a student has a personal smartphone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Last but not least, studying becomes more effective if a student has a personal smartphone / students can study more effectively with a personal smartphone. |
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They can look up the dictionary or find out any sources of reference on the Internet which is useful for them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! They can |
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In addition, it could be said that smartphones are an indispensable part of our life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I "In addition" isn't used for the conclusion so when you use it like this, your post seems to end abruptly. |
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