Jan. 9, 2020
Smart City
Toyota, one of the Japanese major automakers, announced a plan called woven city three days ago.
According to the article, the carmaker will create a new smart city from scratch. What's great about this is that the car company will not refurbish an existing city into a smart city, but it will make a whole city from nothing. The location will be at the base of Mount Fuji in Shizuoka prefecture.
In the city, only autonomous cars can drive.
People know that self-driving vehicle is the future; however, no one can predict what exactly the city, where only driverless cars will move without human-driven cars, is like. Discovering what it will be like seems to be the aim.
The common language is English.
I found it very interesting and hope I can visit the city someday.
日本の大手自動車メーカーの一つであるトヨタは、3日前にwovenと呼ばれる計画を発表しました。
記事によると、その自動車メーカーは新しいスマートシティを一から作るという。これのすごいところは、既存の都市をスマートシティに改造するのではなく、ゼロから都市全体を作るということだ。場所は静岡県の富士山のふもとの予定です。
市内では、自動運転車だけが動きます。
みんなは自動運転車が未来であることを知っています。しかし、人間が運転する車がなく、自動運転車しか動かない都市が実際にはどのようなものなのか、誰も予測できません。
どのようなものになるか知ることがこの計画の目的です。
ちなみに公用語は英語になると発表されました。
とても面白いと思います。いつかその町を訪れたいと思っています。
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Smart City
Toyota, one of the Japanese major automakers of Japan, announced a plan called wWoven cCity three days ago.
According to the article, the carmaker will createbuild a new smart city from scratch.
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What's great about this is that the car company will not refurbish an existing city into a smart city, but it will makrather create a whole city from nothing.
The location will be at the base of Mount Fuji in the Shizuoka prefecture.
In theis city, only autonomous cars canwill be allowed to drive.
People know that self-driving vehicle iss are the future; however, no one can predict what exactly thea city, where only driverless cars will move without human-driven cars, is will be like.
Discovering what it will be like seems to be the aim.
The common language is English.
I found it very interesting and I hope I can visit the city someday.
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Sounds fascinating! Good effort.
Jan. 10, 2020
Thank you so much for correcting!
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