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Oct. 12, 2024

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Teenagers, almost of them don’t know what they will be doing in the future. That why parents have to take a decision what subjects their children will have been taking during next school year. Do you hear that mathematics is the queen of sciences? That is the reason why my sister and her husband will have transferred their son to math class involving a tutor within 2.5 months for his better understanding of the scientific foundations. Logically the best way to achieve a goal looks at it as a project. And if you what to see excellent outcome, you have to know how answering for questions: what, who, when and maybe other of cause if you want, or you may apply SMART technique.
You know my relatives got a very clear and specific goal and that is why. An entrance test will have been conducted in 2.5 months, according to the results of which the children will be assigned to different classes. The condition for enrolling in a math class is getting a high score. Understanding this led my sister to think that it would be better to take a math tutor for son. Obviously, since they pay a tutor, they would like to understand how they measure the process of acquiring knowledge and how achievable the goal is. My sister asked tutor giving her a report after classes. Of course they want their son to be result-oriented when he’s doing the math tasks set. And they hope he will be, especially because he knows, that will receive a new alpine twin-tip ski. Their little project is time-bounded and soon they are going to know the result.
In conclusion, I want to add it will be great if my nephew pass this test, however much more important that he will understand how exciting taking part in new projects, acquiring new skills, abilities and experience.

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TMost teenagers, almost of them don’t know what they will be doing in the future.

That's why parents have to tmake athe decision what subjects their children will have been taking duringtake for the next school year.

DoHave you heard that mathematics is the queen of sciences?

That is the reason why my sister and her husband will have transferred their son to math class involvingwith a tutor withinfor 2.5 months for his betterto improve his understanding of the scientific foundations.

Logically the best way to achieve a goal is to looks at it as a project.

And if you what to see an excellent outcome, you have to know how to answering for the questions: what, who, when and maybe other of cause if you want, or you may apply SMART goal setting technique.

could not understand "and maybe other of cause if you want"

You know my relatives gothave a very clear and specific goal and that is why.

could not understand what "and that is why" is referring to. Possible correction: "My relatives have a very clear and specific goal as a result of the SMART goal setting technique" or "That is why my relatives have a very clear and specific goal."

An entrance test will have beenbe conducted in 2.5 months, according tond based on these results of which the children will be assigned to different classes.

Obviously, since they pay a tutor, they would like to understand how they measure the process of acquiring knowledge and how achievable the goal is.

the third clause is awkward but does not have outright errors

My sister asked the tutor givingto give her a report after the classes.

Of course they want their son to be result-oriented when he’s doing the math tasksproblem sets.

was unsure what "doing the math tasks set" referred to. Possibly "when he's learning math" also?

And they hope he will be, especially because he knows, that will receive a new alpine twin-tip ski.

Could not understand the meaning of this sentence

In conclusion, I want to add it will be great if my nephew passes this test, however it is much more important that he will understand how exciting takingit is to take part in new projects, and to acquiringe new skills, abilities and experience.

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asfero

Oct. 13, 2024

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Thank you for help :)

That why parents have to take a decision what subjects their children will have been taking during next school year.


That's why parents have to tmake athe decision what subjects their children will have been taking duringtake for the next school year.

Do you hear that mathematics is the queen of sciences?


DoHave you heard that mathematics is the queen of sciences?

That is the reason why my sister and her husband will have transferred their son to math class involving a tutor within 2.5 months for his better understanding of the scientific foundations.


That is the reason why my sister and her husband will have transferred their son to math class involvingwith a tutor withinfor 2.5 months for his betterto improve his understanding of the scientific foundations.

Logically the best way to achieve a goal looks at it as a project.


Logically the best way to achieve a goal is to looks at it as a project.

SMART


Teenagers, almost of them don’t know what they will be doing in the future.


TMost teenagers, almost of them don’t know what they will be doing in the future.

And if you what to see excellent outcome, you have to know how answering for questions: what, who, when and maybe other of cause if you want, or you may apply SMART technique.


And if you what to see an excellent outcome, you have to know how to answering for the questions: what, who, when and maybe other of cause if you want, or you may apply SMART goal setting technique.

could not understand "and maybe other of cause if you want"

You know my relatives got a very clear and specific goal and that is why.


You know my relatives gothave a very clear and specific goal and that is why.

could not understand what "and that is why" is referring to. Possible correction: "My relatives have a very clear and specific goal as a result of the SMART goal setting technique" or "That is why my relatives have a very clear and specific goal."

An entrance test will have been conducted in 2.5 months, according to the results of which the children will be assigned to different classes.


An entrance test will have beenbe conducted in 2.5 months, according tond based on these results of which the children will be assigned to different classes.

The condition for enrolling in a math class is getting a high score.


Understanding this led my sister to think that it would be better to take a math tutor for son.


Obviously, since they pay a tutor, they would like to understand how they measure the process of acquiring knowledge and how achievable the goal is.


Obviously, since they pay a tutor, they would like to understand how they measure the process of acquiring knowledge and how achievable the goal is.

the third clause is awkward but does not have outright errors

My sister asked tutor giving her a report after classes.


My sister asked the tutor givingto give her a report after the classes.

Of course they want their son to be result-oriented when he’s doing the math tasks set.


Of course they want their son to be result-oriented when he’s doing the math tasksproblem sets.

was unsure what "doing the math tasks set" referred to. Possibly "when he's learning math" also?

And they hope he will be, especially because he knows, that will receive a new alpine twin-tip ski.


And they hope he will be, especially because he knows, that will receive a new alpine twin-tip ski.

Could not understand the meaning of this sentence

Their little project is time-bounded and soon they are going to know the result.


In conclusion, I want to add it will be great if my nephew pass this test, however much more important that he will understand how exciting taking part in new projects, acquiring new skills, abilities and experience.


In conclusion, I want to add it will be great if my nephew passes this test, however it is much more important that he will understand how exciting takingit is to take part in new projects, and to acquiringe new skills, abilities and experience.

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