Aug. 16, 2021
Small Stream
Yesterday, my family went to a small stream in a mountain near my house.
Since there wasn't rain recently, there wasn't enough water there.
But it was good for my kids because my kids are small and don't swim well, so the low water level of the stream was good.
They learned how to swim and tried to chase fish.
For about 2 hours, they completely exhausted but they might have a good memory.
Before this summer is out, we will go to streams as much as possible.
Small Stream
Yesterday, my family went to a small stream in a mountain near my house.
Since (there wasn't rain/it hasn't rained) recently, there wasn't enough water there.
But it was good for my kids because my kids are small and don't swim well, so the low water level of the stream was good.
"But my kids are small and don't swim well, so the low level of the stream was good" is also okay. You don't need to say both "so" and "because."
They learned how to swim and tried to chase fish.
FoAfter about 2 hours, they were completely exhausted, but they might have made a good memory.
Before this summer is out, we will go to streams as much as possible.
Aug. 17, 2021
Thank you very much!
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Small Stream This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday, my family went to a small stream in a mountain near my house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since there wasn't rain recently, there wasn't enough water there. Since (there wasn't rain/it hasn't rained) recently, there wasn't enough water there. |
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But it was good for my kids because my kids are small and don't swim well, so the low water level of the stream was good. But "But my kids are small and don't swim well, so the low level of the stream was good" is also okay. You don't need to say both "so" and "because." |
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They learned how to swim and tried to chase fish. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For about 2 hours, they completely exhausted but they might have a good memory.
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Before this summer is out, we will go to streams as much as possible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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