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June 2, 2024

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Small Joys This Week

I’ve run out of writing topics, and I want to write something more casual on Sunday. So here are three small happy things from my week:

1. I found a good takeout restaurant near my company that serves soup noodles with fresh shrimp.
2. My library card had been banned because I forgot to return some books. Now the ban period was ended, so I can finally borrow books from the library again.
3. I realized that I know how to deal with bad days better than I did when I was younger. I accept my energy limitations and allow myself to rest more, which was something I struggled with a lot in the past.

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I found a good takeout restaurant near my company that serves soup noodles soup with fresh shrimp.

“Soup noodles” is unnatural—probably a direct translation of 湯麵

“Noodle soup,” “noodles in soup” and “noodles with soup” are all idiomatic.

Small Joys This Week

I’ve run out of writing topics, andso I want to write something more casual ton Sunday.

"on sunday" implies in the future

So here are three small happy things from my week: 1.

I found a good takeout restaurant near my company that serves soup noodles with fresh shrimp.

2.

Now the ban period whas ended, so I can finally borrow books from the library again.

3.

I realized that I know how to deal with bad days better than I did when I was younger.

I accept my energy limitations and allow myself to rest more, which was something I struggled with a lot in the past.

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good work!

Now the ban period whas ended, so I can finally borrow books from the library again.

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Great post!

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abc90377

June 3, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Small Joys This Week

I’ve run out of writing topics, andso I want to write something more casual ton Sunday.

So here are three small happy things from mythis week:


1.

I found a good takeout restaurant near my company that serves soup noodles with fresh shrimp.

2.

My library card had been bannlocked because I forgot to return some books.

Now the ban periodlock was endlifted, so I can finally borrow books from the library again.

3.

I realized that I know how to deal with bad days better than I did when I was younger.

I accept my energy limitationown boundaries and allow myself to rest more, which was something I struggled with a lot in the past.

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#3 is a very valuable lesson!

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abc90377

June 3, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Small Jjoys Tthis Wweek

I’ve run out of writing topics, and I want to write something more casual on Sunday.

So here are three small, happy things from my week:


1.

Now the ban period whas ended, so I can finally borrow books from the library again.

I accept my energy's limitations and allow myself to rest more, which was something I struggled with a lot in the past.

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abc90377

June 3, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Small Joys This Week


Small Jjoys Tthis Wweek

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I’ve run out of writing topics, and I want to write something more casual on Sunday.


I’ve run out of writing topics, and I want to write something more casual on Sunday.

I’ve run out of writing topics, andso I want to write something more casual ton Sunday.

I’ve run out of writing topics, andso I want to write something more casual ton Sunday.

"on sunday" implies in the future

So here are three small happy things from my week: 1.


So here are three small, happy things from my week:


1.

So here are three small happy things from mythis week:


1.

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I found a good takeout restaurant near my company that serves soup noodles with fresh shrimp.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I found a good takeout restaurant near my company that serves soup noodles soup with fresh shrimp.

“Soup noodles” is unnatural—probably a direct translation of 湯麵 “Noodle soup,” “noodles in soup” and “noodles with soup” are all idiomatic.

2.


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My library card had been banned because I forgot to return some books.


My library card had been bannlocked because I forgot to return some books.

Now the ban period was ended, so I can finally borrow books from the library again.


Now the ban period whas ended, so I can finally borrow books from the library again.

Now the ban periodlock was endlifted, so I can finally borrow books from the library again.

Now the ban period whas ended, so I can finally borrow books from the library again.

Now the ban period whas ended, so I can finally borrow books from the library again.

3.


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I realized that I know how to deal with bad days better than I did when I was younger.


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I accept my energy limitations and allow myself to rest more, which was something I struggled with a lot in the past.


I accept my energy's limitations and allow myself to rest more, which was something I struggled with a lot in the past.

I accept my energy limitationown boundaries and allow myself to rest more, which was something I struggled with a lot in the past.

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