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Jack

May 31, 2022

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Slingshot

When I was a kid, I had a few slingshots and I made them by myself.

In order to make a slingshot, you have to prepare the following materials and tools: a piece of steel bar, rubber bands, a piece of leather; a scissor and a plier.

First of all, use the plier to make the steel bar into a special shape.

Secondly, use the scissor to cut the piece of leather into an ellipse shape pouch and dig a small hole on each side of it.

On the top of the slingshot support, there are two insertion holes. Because the rubber is a closed ring, you can easily tie one end of the rubber with the holes, as well as the other end with the holes on the pouch.

So a simple slingshot is done. I once used this stuff to shoot down a few birds.

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When I was a kid, I had a few slingshots and I made them by myself.

In order to make a slingshot, you have to prepare the following materials and tools: a piece of steel bar, rubber bands, a piece of leather;, a pair of scissors and a pair of plier.s.

You could also say “scissors and pliers.”

First of all, use the pliers to make the steel bar into a special shape.

Secondly, use the scissor to cut the piece of leather into an ellipse -shaped pouch and digpierce a small hole on each side of it.

You would cut or pierce the leather.

On the top of the slingshot support, there are two insertion holes.

Because the rubber is a closed ring, you can easily tie one end of the rubber with the holes, as well asnd the other end with the holes on the pouch.

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Jack

May 31, 2022

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Thank you very much.

When I was a kid, I had a few slingshots and I made them by myself.

In order to make a slingshot, you have to prepare the following materials and tools: a piece of steel bar, rubber bands, a piece of leather, a pair of scissors and a pair of pliers.

First of all, use the pliers to make the steel bar into a special shape.

Secondly, use the scissors to cut the piece of leather into an ellipse-shaped pouch and pierce a small hole on each side of it.

On the top of the slingshot support, there are two insertion holes. Because the rubber is a closed ring, you can easily tie one end of the rubber with the holes and the other end with the holes on the pouch.

So a simple slingshot is done. I once used this stuff to shoot down a few birds.

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When I was a kid, I had a few slingshots and I made them by myself.


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In order to make a slingshot, you have to prepare the following materials and tools: a piece of steel bar, rubber bands, a piece of leather; a scissor and a plier.


In order to make a slingshot, you have to prepare the following materials and tools: a piece of steel bar, rubber bands, a piece of leather;, a pair of scissors and a pair of plier.s.

You could also say “scissors and pliers.”

First of all, use the plier to make the steel bar into a special shape.


First of all, use the pliers to make the steel bar into a special shape.

Secondly, use the scissor to cut the piece of leather into an ellipse shape pouch and dig a small hole on each side of it.


Secondly, use the scissor to cut the piece of leather into an ellipse -shaped pouch and digpierce a small hole on each side of it.

You would cut or pierce the leather.

On the top of the slingshot support, there are two insertion holes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Because the rubber is a closed ring, you can easily tie one end of the rubber with the holes, as well as the other end with the holes on the pouch.


Because the rubber is a closed ring, you can easily tie one end of the rubber with the holes, as well asnd the other end with the holes on the pouch.

So a simple slingshot is done.


I once used this stuff to shoot down a few birds.


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