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abc90377

May 26, 2024

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I need to start adjusting my sleeping schedule. I have been staying up late for a while due to work stress. After working all day, although I knew I had to go to bed early, I felt empty for not having enough personal time. I also don’t t have enough energy for my hobbies, which is why I scrolled through social media to entertain myself.

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Sleeping Schedule

I need to start adjusting my sleeping schedule.

I have been staying up late for a while due to work stress.

After having workinged all day, although I knew I had to go to bed early, I felt empty fordue to not having enough personal time.

Since the second part of the sentence is written in past tense, I would make the gerund past tense as well.
I also think 'due to' makes it more clear that you feel empty as a result of not having enough free time.

I also don’t idn't have enough energy for my hobbies, which is why I scrolled through social media to entertain myself.

Again, make sure that the tenses match in both parts of the sentence.

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Nice job. I hope things pick up soon.

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abc90377

May 28, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

Sleeping Schedule

I need to start adjusting my sleeping schedule.

I have been staying up late for a while due to work stress.

After working all day, although I knew I had to go to bed early, I felt empty for not having enough personal time.

I also don’t t have enough energy for my hobbies, which is why I scrolled through social media to entertain myself.

That's relatable.

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I hope you can have a better work-life balance, and have time and energy for your hobbies.

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abc90377

May 27, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

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marblemenow

May 27, 2024

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You're welcome.

Sleeping Schedule

Both work

I need to start adjusting my sleeping schedule.

Again, both work. Also same here.

I have been staying up late for a while due to work stress.

After working all day, although I kneow I hadve to go to bed early, I feelt empty fordue to not having enough personal time.

I think both make sense but something like “due to” might clarify it a little more.

As an extra note, I think that your original sentence would be used more so with reference to a specific day. As in “Yesterday, …”. If this situation still applies to you now, I would use the corrections I’ve put in above.

I also don’t t have enough energy for my hobbies, which is why I scrolled through social media to entertain myself.

Make sure to keep the tense constant. Since you say “I also don’t…”, which is present tense in the negative, you should use the present tense throughout the rest of it (“scroll” instead of “scrolled”)

If you were talking about a specific day, as in if you were recounting an experience from the past (similarly to my comment on the previous sentence), you might say “I also didn’t have enough energy for my hobbies, which is why I scrolled through social media to entertain myself.”

Also, you could use “so”, or something else to indicate that the first part caused the second part, instead of “which is why”. But this is purely for conciseness.

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Overall everything was really good! I also relate to everything here so much. Good luck with English, and also good luck with improving your sleep schedule

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abc90377

May 27, 2024

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Thanks for your detailed corrections !

I also don’t t have enough energy for my hobbies, which is why I scrolled through social media to entertain myself.


I also don’t t have enough energy for my hobbies, which is why I scrolled through social media to entertain myself.

Make sure to keep the tense constant. Since you say “I also don’t…”, which is present tense in the negative, you should use the present tense throughout the rest of it (“scroll” instead of “scrolled”) If you were talking about a specific day, as in if you were recounting an experience from the past (similarly to my comment on the previous sentence), you might say “I also didn’t have enough energy for my hobbies, which is why I scrolled through social media to entertain myself.” Also, you could use “so”, or something else to indicate that the first part caused the second part, instead of “which is why”. But this is purely for conciseness.

I also don’t t have enough energy for my hobbies, which is why I scrolled through social media to entertain myself.

That's relatable.

I also don’t idn't have enough energy for my hobbies, which is why I scrolled through social media to entertain myself.

Again, make sure that the tenses match in both parts of the sentence.

Sleeping Schedule


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Sleeping Schedule

Both work

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I need to start adjusting my sleeping schedule.


I need to start adjusting my sleeping schedule.

Again, both work. Also same here.

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I have been staying up late for a while due to work stress.


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After working all day, although I knew I had to go to bed early, I felt empty for not having enough personal time.


After working all day, although I kneow I hadve to go to bed early, I feelt empty fordue to not having enough personal time.

I think both make sense but something like “due to” might clarify it a little more. As an extra note, I think that your original sentence would be used more so with reference to a specific day. As in “Yesterday, …”. If this situation still applies to you now, I would use the corrections I’ve put in above.

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After having workinged all day, although I knew I had to go to bed early, I felt empty fordue to not having enough personal time.

Since the second part of the sentence is written in past tense, I would make the gerund past tense as well. I also think 'due to' makes it more clear that you feel empty as a result of not having enough free time.

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