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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 23, 2022

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Sleep Is the Most Important

Three years ago, my foot was seriously cut by broken glass. It hurt me a lot and made me stay on a disabled chair for three months, the doctor said I was fortunate that the main hamstring was not cut, but it was very near.
During that time, I found sleep especially deep sleep is very positive for recovery, and I felt a good sleep is more effective than medicine. I even felt something in the damaged area was working to connect each other, they were doing some severe fighting.
Now, I always recommend friends consider more sleep than medicine if I heard they get sick.

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Sleep Is the Most Important

Three years ago, my foot wasI seriously cut bymy foot on broken glass.

It hurt me a lot and made meI had to stay oin a disabled chair for three months, t. The doctor said I was fortunate that the main hamstring was not cut, but it was very nearclose.

During that time, I found that sleep, especially deep sleep, is very posieffective for recovery, and I felso much so that I came to believe that a good sleep is more effective than medicine.

I even felt that something in the damaged area was working to connect each other,more properly: they were doing some severe fighting.

Now, I always recommend to friends to consider more sleep thaninstead of medicine ifwhen I heard they get sick.

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Very well written. Thanks for the advice, too!

Sleep Is the MostVery Important

It had hurt me a lot and made me stay oin a disabled wheelchair for three months, the doctor said I was fortunate enough that the main hamstring was not cut, but it was very nearclose to.

During that time, I had found sleep, especially deep sleep is very positive, to be very good for recovery, and I felt a good sleep iwas more effective than medicine.

Now, I always recommend to my friends consider more sleep thanthat they should consider sleeping more than taking (more) medicine if I heard they gethave gotten sick.

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 23, 2022

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Thanks for your corrections! :)

Sleep Is the Most Important


Sleep Is the MostVery Important

Sleep Is the Most Important

Three years ago, my foot was seriously cut by broken glass.


Three years ago, my foot wasI seriously cut bymy foot on broken glass.

It hurt me a lot and made me stay on a disabled chair for three months, the doctor said I was fortunate that the main hamstring was not cut, but it was very near.


It had hurt me a lot and made me stay oin a disabled wheelchair for three months, the doctor said I was fortunate enough that the main hamstring was not cut, but it was very nearclose to.

It hurt me a lot and made meI had to stay oin a disabled chair for three months, t. The doctor said I was fortunate that the main hamstring was not cut, but it was very nearclose.

During that time, I found sleep especially deep sleep is very positive for recovery, and I felt a good sleep is more effective than medicine.


During that time, I had found sleep, especially deep sleep is very positive, to be very good for recovery, and I felt a good sleep iwas more effective than medicine.

During that time, I found that sleep, especially deep sleep, is very posieffective for recovery, and I felso much so that I came to believe that a good sleep is more effective than medicine.

I even felt something in the damaged area was working to connect each other, they were doing some severe fighting.


I even felt that something in the damaged area was working to connect each other,more properly: they were doing some severe fighting.

Now, I always recommend friends consider more sleep than medicine if I heard they get sick.


Now, I always recommend to my friends consider more sleep thanthat they should consider sleeping more than taking (more) medicine if I heard they gethave gotten sick.

Now, I always recommend to friends to consider more sleep thaninstead of medicine ifwhen I heard they get sick.

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