Skipping a day

IvyDPlum

today

I stayed up late to greet everyone last night, so I slept in this morning. I started my day around noon with some cleaning.
After cleaning, I made Teockguk for my husband and myself. For someone who doesn't know what Teockguk is, it's a Korean traditional dish to eat on the first day of the year. We believe that if we eat a bowl of Teock-guk, we will get one year older. So when I was younger, I ate many bowls, because I wanted to grow up faster.

I wanted to focus on drawing today, but felt super lazy! I gave up being productive and decided to just take it easy. I'll be back studying tomorrow early morning!

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ghelgheli

Skipping a day

I stayed up late to greet everyone last night, so I slept in this morning.

Grammatically fine, but without context it's not clear what "greet" means here. Without context, I would assume you had guests to greet, since that's the nuance of greeting.

I started my day around noon with some cleaning.

After cleaning, I made Teockguk for my husband and myself.

For ~~someon~~those/people who doesn't know what Teockguk is, it's a Korean traditional dish to[commonly] eaten on the first day of the year.

We believe that if we eat a bowl of Teock-guk, we will get one year older.

So when I was younger, I ate many bowls, because I wanted to grow up faster.

I wanted to focus on drawing today, but felt super lazy!

I gave up being productive and decided to just take it easy.

I'll be back studying tomorrow early morning!

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Good luck tomorrow!

IvyDPlum

today

Thanks! I did new year greetings to everyone haha I should have mentioned it!

For someone who doesn't know what Teockguk is, it's a Korean traditional dish to eat on the first day of the year.

For ~~someon~~those/people who doesn't know what Teockguk is, it's a Korean traditional dish to[commonly] eaten on the first day of the year.

We believe that if we eat a bowl of Teock-guk, we will get one year older.