yesterday
Skip a day
I was supposed to take quizzes today, but I felt lazy all day. I decided to skip studying.
Instead, I played Duolingo and reached the end of the English course. My score in Duolingo is 130, which is the highest in this course! Of course, there are legend levels available, so I will take the course little by little later.
Other than that, I did laundry and made dinner. Today was a peaceful, normal day.
Skipping a day
I was supposed to takedo quizzes today, but I felt lazy all day.
Instead, I played Duolingo and reached the end of the English course.
"play" is not normally used for things that are not specifically games or instruments, but I see you mentioned a score, so maybe there's a game in Duolingo? I'm not too familiar with the app to say whether it's correct or not here, but play did sound a little strange to me.
Skipping a day
Skip a day is a command. "Skipping a day" is the presentence you wanna use here.
So, I decided to skip studying.
Optional, but it's good to include transition words. Here, "so" describes causation.
Instead, I played on Duolingo and reached the end of the English course.
Well, Duolingo itself is not exactly a game. So you played (somehow) ON it.
My score ion Duolingo is 130, which is the highest inpossible for this course!
Of course, there are legend levels available, so I will takcontinue the course little by little later.
You already take the couse, instead, you will continue it it.
Other than that, I did laundry and made dinner.
yesterday
On for something playing! Prepositions are always changing to me. Thank you for your feedback!
yesterday
Clarification: Duolingo has many features that make it like a game. However, it is primarily a tool for studying languages so "playing it" isn't exactly the best description.
"on" is for location: You could say "I did some exercises on Duolingo," or "I practiced with Duolingo on my phone."
Skip a dDay
I was supposed to take quizzes today, but I felt lazy all day, so I decided to skip studying.
이건 문장을 두 개로 나누기보다는 이렇게 하나로 이어 주는 게 영어에서 더 자연스러워요. so를 쓰면 흐름도 좋아요.
I decided to skip studying.
Instead, I played Duolingo and reached the end of the English course.
My score in Duolingo score is 130, which is the highest score in this course!
highest만 쓰면 살짝 애매해서, score를 같이 써 주는 게 더 또렷해요.
Of course, there are lLegend levels available, so I will takplan to continue the course little by little later.
이미 하고 있던 코스라서 take보다는 continue가 더 잘 어울려요. plan to는 앞으로 할 생각이라는 느낌을 부드럽게 줘요.
Other than that, I did laundry and made dinner.
Today was a peaceful, normaldinary day.
영어에서는 normal day보다 ordinary day가 글에서는 더 자연스럽게 들려요.
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전체적으로 정말 잘 쓰셨어요 🙂
문장들이 자연스럽고, 하고 싶은 말도 또렷하게 잘 전달돼요. 일기처럼 편안한 글인데도 기본적인 문법이 안정적이고, 영어로 생각해서 쓰고 있다는 느낌이 들어요.
특히 하루 일과를 차분하게 정리하는 흐름이 좋아서 읽는 사람도 부담 없이 읽을 수 있어요. 이런 식으로 꾸준히 짧은 글을 쓰는 게 영어 실력 늘리는 데 정말 큰 도움이 돼요. 지금 방향 아주 잘 가고 있어요 👍
지금처럼 계속 써 보세요!
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감사합니다! 한국어로 첨삭 해주시는거 얼마나 큰 도움이 되는지 몰라요ㅠㅠ 늘 감사합니다
Skip a day
I was supposed to take quizzes today, but I felt lazy all day.
I decided to skip studying.
Instead, I played Duolingo and reached the end of the English course.
My score in Duolingo is 130, which is the highest in this course!
Of course, there are legend levels available, so I will take these courses little by little later.
Other than that, I did laundry and made dinner.
Today was a peaceful, normal day.
Feedback
Excellent!
yesterday
Thank you!!
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