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Feb. 6, 2020

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Skiing, Part 4

Finally I had that skiing week. I feel it was enough. There were good parts and also bed parts. The road was 12 hours long, but fortunetly it didn't seem so long.
First of all we arrived on the hotel at 18 p.m. but on the reception the staff said, that we should have go to another. The misunderstanding caused, that it was two Hotel, but one owner and one e-mail adress. We weren't upset because the receptionist said, that the other Hotel is bigger and much better. Somewhere it was no question, that it should have better, cause it was a court accomodation.
We were never have a this kind of accomodation. We were happy as we knew, that we didn't have to drive to the court an back. It was always so much time (one hour) the procedure. We al ways had to pack in all the devices and the end of the day packing out. So it began very well.
We found the Hotel and occupied our rooms. In our room we were four, and it was a really small room. It was one cabinet, with two hangers. I went to the receptionist for ask four more at least. She wrote it and told me, that I'll get it tomorrow.
Everybody waited for the dinner, we were hungry...

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FI finally I had that skiing week.

I feelthink it was enough.

Think sounds more natural than feel to me.

The roaddrive was 12 hours long, but fortunetly it didn't seem so long.

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I agree with the corrections that other users have made.
I hope that the good parts outweighed the bad parts!

There were good parts and also bead parts.

The road trip was 12 hours long, but fortunatetly it didn't seem so long.

First of all we arrived on the hotel at 186 pm.

but onat the reception the staff said, that we should have go to anotherneeded to go to a different hotel.

The misunderstanding was caused, that it was by the fact that there were two Hhotel,s but only one owner and one e-mail adress.

Not sure what was meant by this sentence.

We weren't upset becaussince the receptionist said, that the other Hotel iwas bigger and much better.

SomewThere it was no question, that it should have about it being better, caus since it was a court accommodation.

We werhave never have abeen to this kind of accommodation.

We were happy as we knew, that we didn't have to drive to the court and back.

It was always so much time (onetook an hour) the procedureo go back and forth.

We al ways had to pack in all the devices and then unpack it all again at the end of the day packing out.

We found the Hhotel and occupied our rooms.

In our room we were four, and it was aThere were four of us in one really small room.

It washad one cabinet, with two hangers.

I went to the receptionist for ask and asked for at least four more at least.

She wrote it down and told me, that I'll get it tomorrow.

Everybody waited for the dinner, w. We were hungry.

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Skiing, Part 4

Finally I had that skiing week.

I feel it was enough.

There were some good parts and also bea few bad parts.

The roadtrip was 12 hours long, but fortunatetly it didn't seem so long.

First of all we arrived on the hotel at 18 p.:00/6 pm,

but othen the reception the staff said, that we should have go to anotherneeded to go someplace else.

There was a misunderstanding becaused, that it was two Hhotels, but one owner and one e-mail adress.

WBut we weren't upset because the receptionist said, that the other Hhotel is bigger and much bettnicer.

I think nicer is a better word to describe hotels

SomewThere it was no question, that it should havewas better, because it was a court accommodation.

The abbreviation cause is really only spoken and not written, at least not like that.

We werehad never have ad this kind of accommodation.

We were happy as we knew, that we didn't have to drive to the court and back.

It was always took so much time (one hour) the procedure.

We al ways had to pack in all the devices andeverything up at the end of the day packing out.

So it began very well.

I went to the receptionist forto ask four more at least four more.

Feedback

Great story!

It was one cabinet, with two hangers.


It washad one cabinet, with two hangers.

I went to the receptionist for ask four more at least.


I went to the receptionist forto ask four more at least four more.

I went to the receptionist for ask and asked for at least four more at least.

She wrote it and told me, that I'll get it tomorrow.


She wrote it down and told me, that I'll get it tomorrow.

Everybody waited for the dinner, we were hungry.


Everybody waited for the dinner, w. We were hungry.

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Skiing, Part 4


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Finally I had that skiing week.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

FI finally I had that skiing week.

I feel it was enough.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feelthink it was enough.

Think sounds more natural than feel to me.

There were good parts and also bed parts.


There were some good parts and also bea few bad parts.

There were good parts and also bead parts.

The road was 12 hours long, but fortunetly it didn't seem so long.


The roadtrip was 12 hours long, but fortunatetly it didn't seem so long.

The road trip was 12 hours long, but fortunatetly it didn't seem so long.

The roaddrive was 12 hours long, but fortunetly it didn't seem so long.

First of all we arrived on the hotel at 18 p.


First of all we arrived on the hotel at 18 p.:00/6 pm,

First of all we arrived on the hotel at 186 pm.

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but on the reception the staff said, that we should have go to another.


but othen the reception the staff said, that we should have go to anotherneeded to go someplace else.

but onat the reception the staff said, that we should have go to anotherneeded to go to a different hotel.

The misunderstanding caused, that it was two Hotel, but one owner and one e-mail adress.


There was a misunderstanding becaused, that it was two Hhotels, but one owner and one e-mail adress.

The misunderstanding was caused, that it was by the fact that there were two Hhotel,s but only one owner and one e-mail adress.

Not sure what was meant by this sentence.

We weren't upset because the receptionist said, that the other Hotel is bigger and much better.


WBut we weren't upset because the receptionist said, that the other Hhotel is bigger and much bettnicer.

I think nicer is a better word to describe hotels

We weren't upset becaussince the receptionist said, that the other Hotel iwas bigger and much better.

Somewhere it was no question, that it should have better, cause it was a court accomodation.


SomewThere it was no question, that it should havewas better, because it was a court accommodation.

The abbreviation cause is really only spoken and not written, at least not like that.

SomewThere it was no question, that it should have about it being better, caus since it was a court accommodation.

We were never have a this kind of accomodation.


We werehad never have ad this kind of accommodation.

We werhave never have abeen to this kind of accommodation.

We were happy as we knew, that we didn't have to drive to the court an back.


We were happy as we knew, that we didn't have to drive to the court and back.

We were happy as we knew, that we didn't have to drive to the court and back.

It was always so much time (one hour) the procedure.


It was always took so much time (one hour) the procedure.

It was always so much time (onetook an hour) the procedureo go back and forth.

We al ways had to pack in all the devices and the end of the day packing out.


We al ways had to pack in all the devices andeverything up at the end of the day packing out.

We al ways had to pack in all the devices and then unpack it all again at the end of the day packing out.

So it began very well.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We found the Hotel and occupied our rooms.


We found the Hhotel and occupied our rooms.

In our room we were four, and it was a really small room.


In our room we were four, and it was aThere were four of us in one really small room.

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