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mirtul0712

Jan. 14, 2020

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Skiing, Part 3

As I mentioned in my previous parts, I'm planning to be in Folgerida in the last week of January. This is my last writing before I'm going to skiing. After my holiday I'm going to write all my experiences.
I have two sets, one black (colour) and one white. I like both but the white one is my favorite. I always begin the first day with the black one. I've the feeling, when I wear the white one I need more confident. I think the white colour symbolize the professionalism on the white court. If one has a nice ski set, I assume they can ski well.
When we have a break we drink a jug of beer and in the afternoons, or in the end of the day we get a bombardino, that is a eggnog with cream.
I have my own ski boot, helmet and ski glasses. I have to rent the headers and the sticks.
I hope it'll be a good weather and we can enjoy fully the whole vacation.
I've tried to workout in order to be in fit. I also need strong thights.
I have a little time to strenghten yet.

Corrections

This is my last writingpost before I'm going to skiing.

You could say, "This is the last time I am writing" or "This is the last post". What you have written is technically correct, since "writing" can also be used as a noun, but it doesn't sound super natural

After my holiday I'm going to write about all my experiences.

I've the feeling, when I wear the white one that I need more confident.

When we have a break we drink a jug of beer and in the afternoons, or inat the end of the day we get a bombardino, thatwhich is a eggnog with cream.

I have my own ski boots, helmet and ski glasses.

I hope it'll be a good weather and we can enjoy fully the whole vacation.

I also need strong thights.

I still have a little time to strenghten yetthen.

Feedback

The original sentence was kind of correct but sounded more like "old English"

Skiing, Part 3

As I mentioned in my previous parts, I'm planning to be in Folgerida in the last week of January.

"in" can be dropped. Makes it sound more natural, and does not lose the sense of the phrase.

This is my last writing before I'm going to skiing.

After my holiday I'm going to write all my experiences.

I have two sets, one black (colour) and one white.

I like both but the white one is my favorite.

I always begin the first day with the black one.

I've the have a feeling, whenever I wear the white one I need more confidentce.

Sorry, but did not understand the last part. I'll assume you mean yourself to be more confident, to need trust in yourself. Even though you can keep "I've" as it will maintain the sense of the phrase, it sounds weird, similar to "ivy".

I think the white colour symbolizes the professionalism on the white court.

If one has a nice ski set, I assume they can ski well.

When we have a break we drink a jug of beer and in the afternoons, or in the end of the day we get a bombardino, that is a eggnog with cream.

I have my own ski boot, helmet and ski glasses.

I have to rent the headers and the sticks.

I hope it'll be a good weather and we can enjoy fully the whole vacation.

I've tried to workout in order to be in fit.

I also need strong thights.

I have a little time to strenghten yet.

Feedback

Very good! Keep practicing and have a great vacation!

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oowowaee

Jan. 15, 2020

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This is my last writing before I'm going to skiing.

This is my last post/entry before I go skiing.

Skiing, Part 3


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As I mentioned in my previous parts, I'm planning to be in Folgerida in the last week of January.


As I mentioned in my previous parts, I'm planning to be in Folgerida in the last week of January.

"in" can be dropped. Makes it sound more natural, and does not lose the sense of the phrase.

This is my last writing before I'm going to skiing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is my last writingpost before I'm going to skiing.

You could say, "This is the last time I am writing" or "This is the last post". What you have written is technically correct, since "writing" can also be used as a noun, but it doesn't sound super natural

After my holiday I'm going to write all my experiences.


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After my holiday I'm going to write about all my experiences.

I have two sets, one black (colour) and one white.


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I like both but the white one is my favorite.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I always begin the first day with the black one.


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I've the feeling, when I wear the white one I need more confident.


I've the have a feeling, whenever I wear the white one I need more confidentce.

Sorry, but did not understand the last part. I'll assume you mean yourself to be more confident, to need trust in yourself. Even though you can keep "I've" as it will maintain the sense of the phrase, it sounds weird, similar to "ivy".

I've the feeling, when I wear the white one that I need more confident.

I think the white colour symbolize the professionalism on the white court.


I think the white colour symbolizes the professionalism on the white court.

If one has a nice ski set, I assume they can ski well.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When we have a break we drink a jug of beer and in the afternoons, or in the end of the day we get a bombardino, that is a eggnog with cream.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When we have a break we drink a jug of beer and in the afternoons, or inat the end of the day we get a bombardino, thatwhich is a eggnog with cream.

I have my own ski boot, helmet and ski glasses.


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I have my own ski boots, helmet and ski glasses.

I have to rent the headers and the sticks.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope it'll be a good weather and we can enjoy fully the whole vacation.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope it'll be a good weather and we can enjoy fully the whole vacation.

I've tried to workout in order to be in fit.


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I also need strong thights.


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I also need strong thights.

I have a little time to strenghten yet.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I still have a little time to strenghten yetthen.

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