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Skiing, Part 2

This January we go skiing to Italy. The name of the town is Folgarida. In the last year we got an apartment where we could enjoy more saunas. I found that great because there is not much better, than you're cold and you have the oppotunity to warm up your whole body.
When we were arriving at the hotel, one of my friend (Adri) and I used to go to the sauna before the dinner. We could talk about so many things and sometimes we had a great company as well.

The dinner was always at 19.00 pm. that was a little bit late for me. It was a buffet first with salads, pastas, whatever you wanted, and then you received the first meal. The first food was two or three sort of soup. The next nub was a main menu, for instance: pasta or meat or fish, and in the end was the dessert. You could choose also three kind of them, like icecream, cake or pie. Therefore, it was very rich, similarly the breakfast.
The breakfast was at 7.00 am, may be it sounds a little bit early, but of course everybody wanted to go as fast as they could to skiing.

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The name of the town we are going to is Folgarida.

You could also combine this sentence with the previous one

The dDinner was always at 19.00 pm.

IFirst was a buffet first with salads, pastas, whatever you wanted, and then you received the first mealcourse.

"Meal" = breakfast/lunch/dinner and includes everything you ate. "Course" is part of a fancier meal where the food arrives at different times. For example, the appetizer, the salad, the soup, the main dish, the dessert, etc.

TFor the first food wascourse, there was a choice of two or three sortkinds of soup.

The next nubcourse was a main menudish, for instance: pasta or, meat, or fish, and in the end was the dessert.

You could also choose alsofrom three kinds of themdessert, like ice cream, cake, or pie.

The bBreakfast was at 7.00 am, may be iwhich might sounds a little bit early, but of course everybody wanted to go skiing as fast as they could to skiingpossible.

Skiing, Part 2

This January we are goingo skiing toin Italy.

In the lLast year we got an apartment where we could enjoy more saunas.

I found that great because there is not muchhing better, thaen when you're cold and you have the opportunity to warm up your whole body.

When we were arriving at the hotel, one of my friends (Adri) and I used to go to the sauna before the dinner.

We cwould talk about so many things and sometimes we had a great company as well.

The dinner was always at 19.00 pm.

tThat was a little bit late for me.

(I would use which instead of that, here. But using 'that' isn't wrong.)

It was a buffet first with salads, pastas, whatever you wanted, and then you received the first meal.

The first foodmeal was two or three sorttypes of soup.

The next nubone was a main menu, for instance: pasta or meat or fish, and in the end was the dessert.

You could also choose also three kinds of them, like ice cream, cake or pie.

Therefore, it was very rich, similarly to the breakfast.

The breakfast was at 7.00 am, may be it sounds a little bit early, but of course everybody wanted to go skiing as fast as they could to skiing.

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Skiing, Part 2


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This January we go skiing to Italy.


This January we are goingo skiing toin Italy.

The name of the town is Folgarida.


The name of the town we are going to is Folgarida.

You could also combine this sentence with the previous one

In the last year we got an apartment where we could enjoy more saunas.


In the lLast year we got an apartment where we could enjoy more saunas.

I found that great because there is not much better, than you're cold and you have the oppotunity to warm up your whole body.


I found that great because there is not muchhing better, thaen when you're cold and you have the opportunity to warm up your whole body.

When we were arriving at the hotel, one of my friend (Adri) and I used to go to the sauna before the dinner.


When we were arriving at the hotel, one of my friends (Adri) and I used to go to the sauna before the dinner.

We could talk about so many things and sometimes we had a great company as well.


We cwould talk about so many things and sometimes we had a great company as well.

The dinner was always at 19.00 pm.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The dDinner was always at 19.00 pm.

that was a little bit late for me.


tThat was a little bit late for me.

(I would use which instead of that, here. But using 'that' isn't wrong.)

It was a buffet first with salads, pastas, whatever you wanted, and then you received the first meal.


It was a buffet first with salads, pastas, whatever you wanted, and then you received the first meal.

IFirst was a buffet first with salads, pastas, whatever you wanted, and then you received the first mealcourse.

"Meal" = breakfast/lunch/dinner and includes everything you ate. "Course" is part of a fancier meal where the food arrives at different times. For example, the appetizer, the salad, the soup, the main dish, the dessert, etc.

The first food was two or three sort of soup.


The first foodmeal was two or three sorttypes of soup.

TFor the first food wascourse, there was a choice of two or three sortkinds of soup.

The next nub was a main menu, for instance: pasta or meat or fish, and in the end was the dessert.


The next nubone was a main menu, for instance: pasta or meat or fish, and in the end was the dessert.

The next nubcourse was a main menudish, for instance: pasta or, meat, or fish, and in the end was the dessert.

You could choose also three kind of them, like icecream, cake or pie.


You could also choose also three kinds of them, like ice cream, cake or pie.

You could also choose alsofrom three kinds of themdessert, like ice cream, cake, or pie.

Therefore, it was very rich, similarly the breakfast.


Therefore, it was very rich, similarly to the breakfast.

The breakfast was at 7.00 am, may be it sounds a little bit early, but of course everybody wanted to go as fast as they could to skiing.


The breakfast was at 7.00 am, may be it sounds a little bit early, but of course everybody wanted to go skiing as fast as they could to skiing.

The bBreakfast was at 7.00 am, may be iwhich might sounds a little bit early, but of course everybody wanted to go skiing as fast as they could to skiingpossible.

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