Skiing ,p, Part 1

At the end of January I'm going to skiing.

Actually, I go with a big company, thatlot of people, includesing my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three other families.

This will be my third occasiontime, and I'mve been waiting for this so muchfor so long.

Earlier, I hadwas a little afraid of skiing because I thinkought it canould be dangerous.

In my opinion the, fear is acan be very useful, what's more, a necessary feeling, however in this case, one will be never enjoying the ski if they don't let it gogo of this feeling.

Last year, when I was skiing, on the first day, I had fallenfell so many times.

The many "stand up"s were so exhausteding that I was begetting really tired.

Therefore, I thought, I should not to fall.

In spite of that, it was onsome of the worst advice for myself.

ItThere had been a cramp in my right leg, henceand because of that I couldn't enjoy the skiing that day.

It was not a pleasure, not a half a dropeven a bit.

I've learnt from a lot of these mistakes, thus I hope it will be much better.

On the last day i, I began to enjoy skiing.

I let myself to go faster.

Now I trust in thethat same feeling, I really want to improve my technique and also enjoying the skiing.

Skiing ,p, Part 1

At the end of January, I'm going to skiing.

Actually I'm going with a big company,group that includes my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three other families.

This will be my third occasiontime (skiing), and I'm waiting for this so much.

"I'm waiting for this so much" could be more elegantly stated as "I'm eagerly anticipating this trip", but that's purely style. I understand the latter

Earlier, I hadwas a little afraid of skiing because I thinkknew it canould be dangerous.

In the next sentence, you talk about the danger.

In my opinion, the fear is a very useful, what's more necessary feeling, however in this case. However, one will be never enjoying the ski if skiing if they don't let it go of it (this feeling).

Last year, when I was skiing on the first day, I had fallenfell so many times.

The many "stand up" were so exhausted that I was being really tiredI was exhausted from standing back up so often.

The first part of this sentence doesn't seem to translate well, unfortunately. :(

Therefore I thought, "I should not stop fall.ing."

I really tried to do my best, so I diwouldn't fall at all.

"didn't" implies that it worked. :P But the following sentences show that that's not the case

In spite of that it was one of the worst advice forI could have given myself.

It had been got a cramp in my right leg, hence I couldn't enjoy the skiing that day.

It was not a pleasure, not a half a dropeven half a drop of pleasure.

I've learnted a lot ofrom these mistakes, thus I hope it will be much better.

This sentence is a little confusing, it sounds like the end of the story

On the last day i, I began to enjoy skiing.

I let myself to go faster.

Now I trust in the sameat feeling,. I really want to improve my technique and also enjoying the skiing.

Trust in the feeling of it being easy and effortless instead of being afraid?

Skiing , part 1

At the end of January I'm going to go skiing.

Actually, I'm going with a biglot of company, that includesing my younger brother, my mother and her partner, and three other families.

This will be my third occasion, and I'm waiting fortime (skiing), and I looking forward to this so much.

Earlier I hadI was a little afraid of skiing before because I think it canought it would be dangerous.

In my opinion the fear is a very useful, what's more necessary feeling, however in this case; however one will be never be able to enjoying the skiing if they don't let it go of this feeling.

Last year, when I was skiing on the first day, I had fallenfell so many times.

The many "stand up" were soStanding up so many times was exhausted thating and I was begetting really tired.

Therefore, I thought, I should not stop falling.

In spite of that, it was onsome of the worst advice for myself.

It had been a cramp in my right leg, hence I couldn't enjoy the skiing that day.

It was not a pleasure, not even a half a drop.

I've learnt a lot ofrom these mistakes, thus I hope it will be much better (this time).

On the last day i, I began enjoy skiing.

Now that I trust in theat same feeling, I really want to improve my technique and also enjoying the skiing.