Nov. 29, 2021
Skating
Two months ago, my husband joined a skating association where we live.
I went to watch their skating training every week. My husband was the only male on the skating team, and his level was the lowest.
Two months passed, my husband's level has been significantly improved.
One day, I also skated for a while. I understood that skating was a sport that looks easy but difficult to do. Getting up after a fall is the first step to success for me.
Skating
Two months ago, my husband joined a skating association where we live.
I went to watch their skating training every week.
My husband was the only male on the skating team, and his level was the lowest.
Two months passed, and my husband's level has been significantly improved.
One day, I also skated for a while.
I understoorealized that skating wais a sport that looks easy but is difficult to do.
It sounds like you became aware of the difficulty of skating after you tried it, so "realize" is more accurate.
"skating is a sport that looks easy" --> this is a general property of skating, so use present tense.
Getting up after a fall is the first step to success for me.
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Nice work! I like your conclusion about success :)
Nov. 30, 2021
Thank you.
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Skating This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Two months ago, my husband joined a skating association where we live. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I went to watch their skating training every week. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My husband was the only male on the skating team, and his level was the lowest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Two months passed, my husband's level has been significantly improved. Two months passed, and my husband's level has been significantly improved. |
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One day, I also skated for a while. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I understood that skating was a sport that looks easy but difficult to do. I It sounds like you became aware of the difficulty of skating after you tried it, so "realize" is more accurate. "skating is a sport that looks easy" --> this is a general property of skating, so use present tense. |
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Getting up after a fall is the first step to success for me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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