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In English, the first letter in all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., in the title must be capitalized.

Hello, I hope that I get good approachesfeedback in the Reddit thread here.

I'm not sure what you mean by "approaches".

The "here" feels kind of redundant because you just mentioned where you were looking.

I have been learning English for many years, come from Germany, and am 20 years old.

"I have" is often written/said as "I've".

My problem in English is that I have to simplify my way of thinking pattern.

"Thinking pattern" didn't really sound natural to me here.

Instead of "way", you could also use "manner", which sounds more formal.

Often in my native language, as well as English, I tend to add German writing philosophy writing to my English writing style.

I'm not sure that "philosophy" was used correctly here. "Writing philosophy" is kind of a writing style, so you don't need to add it to "English writing". However, there's a big difference between "writing philosophy" and "philosophical writing".

WhatBy which I mean: Emanuel Kant, for example, has written very complex works, which Englishwhen translatesd to us as befrom English produce something unreadable, at least in my opinion.

I tend to adopt the same level of writing style, to present something complicated, just to emit eloquence, soshow off, and so I use complicated words to impress and show my English level.

I wasn't really sure what you meant by "emit eloquence".

That didn’t get me far, so now I want tgo deconstruct my spelling, and I want to decipher different wayfrom the bottom up, and find a different way of doing things.

This means that I just need to read and listen to books, and YouTube Channels to make my entire thinking process simpler, and more concisely and clear, with noout redundancy.

I want to explain my ideas in writing as well as spokenwhen I speak.

I just tend to overthink things.

Simple points, explained in a sophisticated explained and therefore confusingly presentedmanner seem confusing.

A friend and I were doing a class project class.

Without withholding to rateI would say that an honest assessment of my friend in's English, I level would rate himbe around as B2.

TWhen the teacher gave us back our work, she callsed me and says gid, "Good work, your final result 6.5was 6.5 out of 10 points".

My friend getsot a 7.9 out of 10.

I asked the teacher how she justifiesd this: and she says yourid that, "[My] English uses a more eloquent vocabulary, which sounds good, but often makes your writing style look illiterate.

This sentence is really confusing as "eloquent vocabulary" and "illiterate" almost seem like antonyms.

On the other hand, your friend (Max) writes very simply and truly,plainly, which is readable forto everyone".

It is not about whether you can impress someone with your choice of words, but that your counterpart understands you and can process your information.

"It is" is often said/written as "It's".

I hope this makes sense, and that you can help me.